Writer's test! discussion

I do not cry... EVER.
But this got me pretty close.
PLEASE! PLEASE! Tell me this doesn't happen anymore.

I didn't cry, but my heart did drop like 3 stories.
My first one was partially based on me too -- the younger stuff, not the car or the kidney thing -- and so far like a dozen have cried from it (IDK why, it's not THAT sad).
When i said, "Tell me this doesn't happen anymore."
I meant what happened in the poem.
I hope THAT doesn't happen and if it does, GET OUT OF THERE.

:/
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Have you thought of going to the cops?
He has no right to do that.

Another sad one. :(
GOOD, but sad.
I still think you should go to the police about what's been going on, but that's just IMO.
No one has the right to make you feel that way.
No one has the right to hit you.

There are some really good families out there who would love to take you and your brother in.
I know a family with like eight kids who are all loved to death by the mother. Half of them aren't hers. :)

If your father was really your family, he wouldn't be beating the crap out of you... EVER.
It isn't wrong to do what's right for yourself.