Grimm Thoughts discussion

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Race:
Rank:(King or Queen, Prince or Princess only, leave empty if not royal)
Appearance:
History:
Personality:
Weapon:
Powers:
Pet:
Tattoos:
Other:

Name: Jason Tod
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Rank: ( I want it to be a dark sorcerer or mage :/ )
Appearance: People fear him because of his evil magic and usually dont get near him unless they want to die :/
History: As a boy, he discovered his dark abilities and powers. Hale ran away from the underworld to take on the real world and conquer it
Personality: Cruel, evil, gets mad fast, cold
Weapon: A dark black blade with a gold hilt
Powers: Dark magic, Soul Eating, Sending people to death
Pets: Black Pegasus
Tattoos:
Other:

Name: Estelle
Age:16
Gender:Female
Rank:Princess
Appearance:Long blond hair, always wears it down with her black dress,brown caramel boots, blue eyes that match her bracelet
History: None,except her brother mysteriously murdered by an unknown servant
Personality:Silent but deadly
Weapon:Her brothers old hunting blade
Powers:Telepathic
Pet:White cat named Abby
Tattoos:Ravens on her neck
Other:

Name: Alex
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Rank:none(not widely known to civilization)
Appearance: Dirty blond hair that is worn in a type of "mop top" but shorter in length, desert camouflage all-purpose boots, brown eyes that are almost reached by his hair.
History:None, except was separated from his family at a young age
Weapon: Maple wood and spider silk bow, iron sword that never gets damaged.
Powers: Great shot with his bow, amazing concentration, telepathic
Pet:Pegasus named Austin, German shepherd named Clover
Tatoos: none
Other: none

2 Alex E wrote: "Name: Alex
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Rank:none(not widely known to civilization)
Appearance: Dirty blond hair that is worn in a type of "mop top" but shorter in length, desert camouflage all-purpose boo..."

NO PEGASUS

Akbar wrote: "Name: Jason Tod
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Rank: ( I want it to be a dark sorcerer or mage :/ )
Appearance: People fear him because of his evil magic and usually dont get near him unless they want to die..."

NO PEGASUS

Name: Ari Kingsleigh
Age: 16
Gender: female
Race: human
Rank:
Appearance: http://data.whicdn.com/images/1653743...
History: Never had a home or family because they left her in an orphanage she ran away from. Became a thief so she could get by.
Personality: quiet, smart, witty
Weapon: bow
Powers:
Pet: chow chow
Tattoos:
Other:

Just Halle wrote: "Name: Ari Kingsleigh
Age: 16
Gender: female
Race: white
Rank:(King or Queen, Prince or Princess only, leave empty if not royal)
Appearance:
History: Never had a home or family. Thief.
Personality:..."

Race is not white, human, faery, witch, ect

Need Appearance

Needs more history

Rank need editing

Just Halle wrote: "So was my charrie approved?"

Could you eXPAND her history, why no family, why a theif, child hood, ect

Kris wrote: "2 Alex E wrote: "Name: Alex
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Rank:none(not widely known to civilization)
Appearance: Dirty blond hair that is worn in a type of "mop top" but shorter in length, desert camouflag..."
Ok, then just the German Shepherd named Clover.

Is my charrie approved?