Individuality discussion

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<.b>Name:<./b> First and last; middle is optional.

<.b>Age:<./b> Currently you are not allowed to make anyone under the age of 16 to avoid too many RP topics.

<.b>Gender:<./b>

<.b>Group:<./b> Come back and edit this later, after you've been sorted; see plot

<.b>Appearance<./b> Description or picture is fine.

<.b>Personality:<./b> Before they were sorted. Still important because bits of their personality might show through even when they're in their group.

<.b>Positives:<./b> About their personality.

<.b>Negatives:<./b> Like positives... but not.

<.b>Likes:<./b>

<.b>Dislikes:<./b>

<.b>Other:<./b>

Note: There is no history because everyone's is the same. (See plot.)

Name: Hesty Fronga

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Group: N/A

Appearance: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-tyq3MtHNOrE...
Long blondish-brownish hair, that she usually wears down, Grey eyes that seem like they are looking into your soul. Perfect, unblemished skin, it seems to glow. She is very delicate, and extremely beautiful.

Personality: Quiet and sweet, but she can get angry and rude. She is somewhat a leader, and is very intelligent. The woman gave her books, and she would always sit in a corner and read. She isnt very social, and wouldnt be even if she had grown up in a social life style.

Positives: She is sweet and kind, and very intelligent. She is easily trusted, and a great secret keeper.

Negatives: She doesnt have a sense of humor, she doesnt trust people easily, and she isnt social. She can be rude and surly, but not very often.

Likes: She likes to read, she likes flowers, and anything delicate.

Dislikes: bugs, fire.

Other:

Name: Soria Aureal.

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Group: Come back and edit this later, after you've been sorted; see plot

Appearance soria is tall, and very well built,as in the time that he spends not with the middle aged woman that is his teacher, he does pushups, situps, and runs circles around the room to stay in shape. He has short dirty blonde hair, striking eyes, one blue, one brown, and he wears whatever the woman gives him to.

Personality: He appears to be very docile and dormant, conforming to everything that everyone tells him to do, and to him he is. But underneath all of that, underneath so deep that even he can't see it, is a leader, a fighter, a non conformist, but for now he is as idle as a car at a stop light. He is kind to the one person He ever met, the middle aged woman, and He doesn't get angry easily, and is easygoing.
Positives: He is very kind, and has never gotten angry. He smiles a lot, and jokes around a lot too. He will instantly try to become your friend, as he longs for more human contact, and he wants also to get sorted soon, so that he can begin his work.
Negatives: If he ever does get angry, it will be an explosion of pent up rage, and he also is a natural outsider, having never been around another human. very intelligent, and doesn't stop it from showing, and some think that that is obnoxious. but it isn't, it's just how he is, because he hasn't learned any differently.

Likes: Whatever the government wants him to.

Dislikes: Whatever the government wants him to.

Other:

Name: Birch Redmond

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Group: Come back and edit this later, after you've been sorted; see plot

Appearance
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Personality: He is genuinely a nice guy, always trying to make people smile or laugh. He's very funny, and if he gets you annoyed or mad he'll make you laugh in a second and forget why he annoyed you. He has kind of a twisted sense of humor, so don't worry if you don't understand his jokes, or if you do and don't find them funny. Very outgoing and confident, he actually does try to befriend people. He doesn't like to see someone all by themself, and he doesn't like to see people that are miserable. Despite his confidence, he is afraid of rejection.

Habits/Mannerisms: He runs his hand through his hair quite a lot. Whenever he is nervous his fingers start to twitch. You can tell when he is tired because he stares at one spot until distracted by something else.

Strengths: Friendly, funny, loyal, genuine, honest, confident, gentleman-like.

Weaknesses: Sometimes he can be a bit annoying, he hates to be alone, struggles with serious situations.

Likes: Sweets, food, jokes.

Dislikes: Being alone.

Name: Taylor Adams

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Group: Come back and edit this later, after you've been sorted; see plot

Appearance:
Taylor has shy brown eyes, that seem to sparkel in the sunlight. She has freckles running across her nose, and a birthmark between her eyes. Taylor has bangs that stop just above her eyes, and long brown hair that is worn in a braid.
Taylor is in the average range for height at her age, but she's on the taller side of average. She is skinny, and fragile looking. She has light tan skin.

Personality: So shy, she doesn't even speak. Some people think that she's rude, and self-centered because she won't talk to them, but she's just shy. But, if you get her talking, she is a very kind, and sweet girl. She is brave, and intelligent. She will say something that makes you laugh, when she's not even trying.
But, she has a short temper, and sometimes doesn't get what your trying to say.

Positives: Kind, brave, intelligent, funny, and sweet.

Negatives: She has a short temper. So if you make her angry, she will hurt you. And, because of her shyness, she doesn't really have any friends.

Likes: Reading, drawing, writing, outdoors.

Dislikes: The government, crowds.

Other: N/A

Name: December Ryes

Age: 16

Gender: female

Group:

Appearance http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/201...

Personality: December was quiet but when you grt to know her she is funny and very outgoing. She dosn't no how to say no and she always tries to please everyone. She is usally shy but when there is a common intrest, she will talk to you and won't stop

Positives: She is really nice, smart, and funny. She can connect with anyone and everyone at any time an place.

Negatives: she can get really mad and she doesn’t know when to stop talking

Likes: She likes to draw, sing, read at times.

Dislikes: She hates when people tell her what to do.

Other: She used to always wear a necklace http://www.fireandice.com/images/P/40...

Name: Jace Alyss Spade.

Age: 17.

Gender: "I would hope I do not remind you of a boy.." <- Female.

Group: 2.

Appearance Jace has long raven's wing hair that falls to her knees, bright unknown colored eyes, and skin as pale as porcelain. Long dark lashes frame her eyes, and her frame itself is tall and thin with slight, though not prominent, curves. (view spoiler)[ (hide spoiler)]

Personality: Jace is a person of extremes. She is either very childish, or very serious. Her moods vary, but she is always... well, VERY.

Positives: Jace is usually a very pleasant, fun person. Her randomness usually makes it easy for her to talk to people.

Negatives: Her moods change quickly, and this can get her in trouble.

Likes: Boys, animals, fire, reading, singing, art.

Dislikes: Girls, nature haters, being picked on, rude people.

Other: She carries around a tiny stuffed bunny in her pocket that she named Mr. Ears. But shh, she doesn't want anyone to know!

Name: Samantha Candalin

Age: 17

Gender Female

Group:

Appearance:

Personality: She is sweet and smart, in a problem, she will look at her surrondings and think it through before making her move. She also likes to think her mind, she doesn't care about the punishent that it may bring, and the concequences.

Positives: She's true to her word, someone you can trust and won't betray you

Negatives: She likes to say what she's thinking, she doesn't care who hears.

Likes: Reading, reading, and reading, music, inventing, anything that involves thinking

Dislikes: Bullies, people who make fun of anyone or who she is. She also doesn't like being bossed around 24/7.

Can you beef it up a little? It's kinda vague. (And make sure you have correct grammar and spelling!)

Better?