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Tris is a character that is courageous, confident, and has a very strong opinion. She is not afraid to say what she thinks and is always trying her best to do what's right or the best solution in bad situations. Tris shows her personality in a lot that she says in the book. For example, "Tobias is right about you. You're nothing but an arrogant, lying piece of garbage." (45). Tris says this when she is trying to pry information out of someone. I feel that this quote reflects Tris' fearlessness and strong opinion which shows her strong personality.
So far I really like Insurgent. I feel it is well written and that I can connect with some of the characters in it. I really like that it is intense so you want to keep reading, but it also has a bit of a love story in it which makes it even better. One part of the book I find very frustrating is when Tris is leaving everyone she loves to turn herself into the villain of the book. "I slip out of his arms. I shrug on one of his sweatshirts so i can carry the smell with me. I slip my feet into my shoes. I don't take any weapons or keepsakes." (314). I dislike this part especially because Tris is finally back with all of her friends and the boy she loves but she is going to leave it all behind again.




So far, I think that Unwind has the potential to be one of the most entertaining books I have ever read. It has the suspense, mystery, horror, disagreement, rebellion, and reality to make this book feel like it could actually happen in the future. “Risa holds back a smile. Suddenly she’s feeling strangely at ease with Connor. She marvels at how that could be. If their argument had been entirely real, she’d be on her guard against him. If it had been entirely a show she’d be on guard too, because if he could lie so convincingly, she’d never be able to rust him. But this was a mixture of both. It was real, it was pretend, and that combination made it all right- it made it safe, like performing death-defying acrobatic tricks above a safety net” (50). It demonstrates how people in a time of suffering can fill a need in and trust one another though they may even come from different backgrounds. This book makes you think that this is what it should be like in the real world today.



So far I love this book, in has engaged me and compelled to continue reading it. I love how easily it is to connect too and how it is about characters are roughly the same ages as me. Another reason why I enjoy it so much is there is always some sort of excitement happening at any point. An example of this is on page 28, when Katniss says, "…it would be one thing if I had planned to stir things up, but given the circumstances…how on earth did I cause so much trouble?" This shows you there is a constant strain on Katniss and it adds more excitement.






This book has been very good so far. There have been a couple of twists here and there that I did not expect. Something that I really enjoy is the fact that Nora can not remember Patch at all. Even though she does not remember him she remembers parts of when they were together. After she meets Patch/Jev for the second time there are little things that feel right when they are together. She can remember the intensity of his black eyes and that haunts her. “The flash of black bursting at the back of my mind was so intense, the color completely stained my vision for several seconds.” (123) is a line that Becca Fitzpatrick uses to express this. Throughout the scenes when they are together I am always wondering if now was the time that she would finally remember him. Sadly, she has not gained back all of her memories yet. I am hoping this happens very soon.


This book is great so far. It has a good and clear story to it. This book really relates to me because Zach is also a 15 year old and he also goes to high school. This book has a lot of exciting and suspenseful parts. "Not one of them having a clue about how much trouble they were really in, how badly I had them outnumbered." This was on the first page in my book and it was Zach's dad talking about how he had defeated many bad guys before. This part made me wonder what was going to happen next and why his dad did what he does. Zach's dad has a whole side of him that zach doesn't even know about.

The murderer is Henry H. Holmes. He built a parody of the World’s Fair “White City” which he called the “World’s Fair Hotel”. This is where he brought his victims. Those who saw him described him as having “dark hair and striking blue eyes, once likened to the eyes of a mesmerist” (35). He was “five feet, eight inches (and) weighed only 155 pounds” (35). Women adored him because he “broke the prevailing rules of casual intimacy: He stood too close, stared too hard, and touched too much and too long” (36). The reader can tell by these descriptions that Holmes is somewhat of a shady character, even if they don’t come right out and say it.
So far I like this book a lot. It’s well written and interesting. One thing I’m finding a little frustrating, though, is how the author describes everything to absolute death. He took a full five pages just to explain why Chicago was chosen to host the World’s Fair. Sometimes it’s nice to just have things stated simply. I do like the way the author is already building suspense in regard to Holmes. I just finished a chapter where he comes in possession of a pharmacy. The woman who owned it was old and her husband was dying. He convinced her to let him manage the store and shortly after she disappeared. He claimed that she had gone to visit relatives in California. The last line of the chapter says that “Mrs. Holton, he explained, liked California so much that she had decided to settle there permanently” (47).




As I read more and more into this book, the more I learn that it isn't for me. I am not intrested in a dated book that uses language that I can't understand. Another aspect that I don't enjoy about it is that it is very full of fantasy. I like to use my imangination but not to this point. " I wish for the most horrifying flying dragon in the history of Fantasia!' This is one of the quotes that I picked out trying to stress my point of extreme fantasy.
Sometimes extreme fantasy novels are for a lot of people, but I konw that they are not for me. I would not reccomend this book to anyone that likes non-fiction writing becasue "The Neverending Story" is far from it.

Your book sounds like something that I would be intrested in reading. Let me know when your done so I can check it out! Thanks :)



Hi Nicole! We need to have a book chat. I am interested in your book. I was wondering what genre it is? Hopefully we can talk about this in class. Enjoy the reading and let me know how it is!! P.S., is the "never ending story" really never ending?

Hi Krystal! Your book sounds different, maybe something I wouldn't read. I do not like music. But don't get me wrong, I hope you enjoy this and let me know more about it! Don't let this discourage you. You had a good post. :)
