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Sarwah Osei-Tutu
Asking authors and fellow Goodreads to review my book please.http://www.amazon.com/dp/B009BK18RY

Two poetry books worth reviewing if you enjoy these lines:

This Place

…If not for the memory
of this place-

with metal swings
echoing a to-fro song,
and slides white-hot
burning as you go along
down, sweet sweat
dripping

albeit, better than
sitting any where
claustrophobically cool;
as if: anything unnatural
could be toxin to my chi;

as if: the AC could drain me
of my energy; hot potentiality
need not be cooled;
that is: air pumped out sucks in
my productivity: to compose,
certainly, this epic explanation
of a summer home vacation-

then without any hesitation, I would go home.

As it is,
there is a charm about being
isolated from the consistent whirl
and buzz of constant corporation;

while here, in
this place, there is moderation;
that is: a sensation to clear
the senses, and be yourself
entirely free of expectation;

as it is: there is an ease
about dedication;
as if: one could reach the clouds
in supple strides,
to hide among the heavens,
where even drone planes cannot see;

at last, free to move, to breathe about
without fear; perseverance:
just an attitude of altitude
of adherence to the laws
written upon the heart;
where the Source of the start
concludes His finished work in me…”

This Place

and then there is:

MI Life Book 1

When you receive perfect love,
there is no fear;

when you experience no fear,
there is understanding;

when you submit to understanding;
there is discipline;

when you suffer for discipline,
there is wisdom;

when you labour in wisdom,
there is fulfillment;

when you thrive in fulfillment,
there is peace;

when you stand in peace,
there is perfect love.

MI Life Book 1

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Miranda Innaimo

What a lovely pen!
"just an attitude of altitude
of adherence to the laws
written upon the heart;
where the Source of the start
concludes His finished work in me…”

Perfect free verse and similes...your form is impeccable. I'm new to GoodReads, as far as commenting on Poets. Looking forward to purchasing your works.

Hi 😊
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Good Afternoon,

I am looking for some review and thoughts on my poetry blog:
https://desimusing.wordpress.com/

Please let me know your inner musings :)

Hello!

Anyone interested in reading and reviewing on Amazon my debut poetry chapbook titled Empty your cup?

It's a collection of rhyming poetry that is thought-provoking and questions habitual ways of thinking, including themes like the impact of memory on our thoughts and beliefs.

It was recently reviewed by Emma Lee on her blog: https://emmalee1.wordpress.com/2024/0...

Let me know and I'll send you a free copy of my book via email: cmartinspoetry@gmail.com.