Writer Group discussion

This is where we discuss everything going on in our book.

I'm not complaining because I like third person better, but what happened to first person from two points of view?

I never read anything about first person. As for the two point of views, they are coming; I just figured the centaur would have point of view for the prologue.

By the way, nice touch with the conflicted emotions and such.

I think maybe this prologue should take place a few days after chapter one so that we have time to develop our protagonist.

I think the reation to the kidnapping would be a better way to develope the blacksmith and slave, we don't need anything before that.

Also: instead of the centaur 'seducing' the daughter, she should develope stockholm syndrome. You know, later.

Well, let's just see how it pans out.

Love your contribution, Jonathan. Very poetic. Just so you know the centaur is no longer serving Prometheus but opposing him and his priests.

Okay, I may just change things there then? I'll remove the hints of the 'dark god' but still have him taking the child to a temple. Then whoever writes next can talk about that?

Sounds good. The reason the centaur kidnaps the girl is to use her as leverage against her father in order to keep him from giving the priests the sword.

Well I think I edited enough so that that could be read into the story for sure...

Seems good.

Why has no one else written anything yet?