Y.A WRITERS! discussion

I just tried to make my title a little original. Excuse me if it makes no sense!

Alrightie, so this is a link to my story, Among the Ruins.
It's another creative writing piece if anyone wants to check it out and criticize, be my guest! I love criticism!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Aaaand if you guys are hair-brained enough to check out my longer story, here it is:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
(For those who want to try make my cover for me, this is the story!)

I'll read it!

Aw, thanks! I'm in your Insanity RP too. :)

Anyone interested in uncommon fairytale retellings? Well, I have one here if anyone is:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...