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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

This is a cave that seems scary, frightening.


message 2: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Ash limps into the cave, not caring that it's dark.


message 3: by Cait Sith (last edited Oct 27, 2012 09:28PM) (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments Johnny ran inside, crying. He didn't even notice Ash. He ran all the way to back of the cave and sat down, facing the wall. Johnny's small voice filled the cave. "Why am I always hated by my family?" He asked himself. "Why is it that I can't have fun, because it hurts someone?"


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Mortez was crying, the sound muffled from where Ash was standing.


message 5: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) ((Thought Johnny was going to the lake....))

Ash heard crying and started limping toward it.


message 6: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments ((I changed it))


message 7: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments ((it now says he runs to the cave))


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Mortez was in a dark part of the cave, and was stuck.


message 9: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) ((Ahh....))

Ash finds a girl, "Hey, you ok?" He asks leaning on the side of the cave.


message 10: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments Johnny laid down, on the cave floor, wrapped his tail around himself like a blanket and just laid there, facing the back wall of the cave.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

All Mortez could see was darkness. “who are you?” She asked, scared to death.


message 12: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) "My name is Ash." He says, "Do you need help?"


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

“yes, i kind of do.” She admitted.


message 14: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Ash smiles down at her and offers his hand.


message 15: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments A cool breeze blew into the cave, and because the cave was already cold, it made it even colder.

Johnny started to shiver. But he didn't move, he just laid where he was.


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

“I can't move one of my hands.” She said. One of her hands was under a heavy rock, and she couldn't move it. The hand was numb from being under the massive rock.for so long.


message 17: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Ash looks at it and limps over to her, he then uses all his streinth to move the rock enough for her to get her hands free.


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Mortez smiled gleefully. Sure, her hand hurt like hell, but it wasfree now! She could actually move her fingers. She went up to Ash and hugged him happily.


message 19: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Ash smiles and hugs her back, "You ok now?" He asks.


message 20: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments The cave started to rumble, and the roof caved in, towards the back, sealing Johnny inside.

Johnny started coughing from all the dust in the air now. He ran over to pile of rock that is blocking his exit. He tries to dig through it but it's too hard. He trys to move the rocks, but they're too heavy. So he screams. "HELP!"


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

“yeah! And now I can see my sister! and get some food.... I haven't eaten since yesterday afternoon.”


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

Mortez nearly jumps out of her skin when she hears someone scream.


message 23: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments Johnny tries to go right through it, but all he gets is scrapes and bruises. "I think I deserved this." He said as he huddled up in the back corner.


message 24: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Ash hears the rumble and limps over to it.


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

Mortez folows, feeling frightened.


message 26: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) "Johnny!?" Ash asks leaning against the wall.


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

Mortez eyes were wide.


message 28: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) ((G2g.... talk to you later....))


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

((me too bye everyone ))


message 30: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments ((kk))

"Ash, Im sorry. Please help me." Johnny said, sounding beyond terrified.


message 31: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments Johnny started sobbing.


message 32: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Ash puts his hands on the wall, "Johnny. Hang in there. I'll try to find a way to get you out...."


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

"Johnny's in there?" She asked, her innocence showing.


message 34: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Ash nods.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

Mortez nods.


message 36: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Ash grabs a large rock and sighs as he tries to pull back with one good foot, "I'd also try to watch out. This wall could tumble at any time...."


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

Mortez looks at the rock. "Maybe we should go get help?"


message 38: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Ash looks at her, "If I went anywhere else, I don't think I could make it back...."


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

"I could go. Do you know where my sister is?"


message 40: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Ash looks at her, "OH MY GOD! It's you! You're who she's looking for! Ya, she's at my cabin."


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

She nodded. "thank you!" She walked out of the cave, and then started to run to the fox's cabin.


message 42: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments Johnny moves away from the large pile of rocks.


message 43: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Ash hears him move, "You ok?"


message 44: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments "Im huwt. Evewywhewe. Im sowwy fow making you fall, Im sowwy fow thinking it was funny." Johnny told him.


message 45: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Ash nods, "It's ok Johnny.... just don't do it again." He says trying to move more rocks.


message 46: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments "Ok." Johnny said to him, sounding scared.

Tristan ran inside and saw the big pile of rocks. He ran over and started to pull rocks out of the way.

Blade (my new charrie, if you want, look at his charrie info) walked inside and pulled a large rock out of the way.


message 47: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) ((OH NO!!!! NOT ANOTHER FOX!!!!))

Ash looks at them and helps them as much as he can.


message 48: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments ((No, Blade is half Shapeshifter, Half Divine))


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

Mortex and Nania finally walk in, still holding hands. They stop when they get to where Johnny is stuck, and Nania lats go of Mortez and starts lifting away rocks, as many as her strength allowed her to.


message 50: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 601 comments Blade moves a large rock and finally gets through the wall of rocks. He moves out of the way and allows Ash to get Johnny.


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