☀Ignite Your Creativity☀ discussion

Hi! I'm Casey. I've had a membership to goodreads for a while but haven't been on much, started playing around with it yesterday and now I think I love it. :) I added one of my stories, it's an unfinished piece but feedback is always great.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

It's a romance, called The Interview. I like to add a little humor to my stories. :)

One paragraph appeared twice- was that an error that needs editing? I'd proof-read it so you know & I think I did spot an error or two in other parts. Can't remember what...

I'm glad you've decided you need to finish it? You have, please say ;) Obviously in a short story, you can't expect too much of a characters in means of developing- but Stephanie has become a clear female with a plan- and as for her boss, she lucked out on that one ;) Maybe try to show, not tell- some people dislike that & you seem to use dialogue quite a lot for that, when really, although dialogue is important- it's a novel, you can just show them using words... Or, even, pictures where suitable ;)

Hope this helped!