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Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
This is my portfolio of my writing. I have been writing, well, I can not remember, but I am in about seven books right now. I know, I know, that is a lot of books to be writing at the same time. I do no know why, but when ever I get a perfect idea, I just need to put it down. I will put it on my hand if I am at a concert or I just do not have anything to put it on.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
It is okay, I have finished four of them I really need to, actually I have finished three, the fourth is still in progress and then there are two that are not together, but are in progress though. Oh yeah I forgot that I am a freshman in high school.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
you are welcome, I have to get off now. Poeple say that I am an awome write (sorry about the spelling)


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Litera wrote: "What age is a freshman?"

grade nine


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
like age 14 to 15


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
you are welcome


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
If you ever want to read any of my stories here is the link.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/9...


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
This is my recant book in progress:

It is about a girl who is born the princess of Galicia. At the same time there is a prince of the wolves that has to rule with her. Can she rule with a werewolf keeping the peace between the vampires and the werewolves or just give up the throne live with her grandma in the United States?


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Thanks I am still in the progress.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Here is a poem I wrote when I was little:


I am the stars that glow at night,

I am the bees that buzz all day,

I am the light that shines all day and all night.

I am the willows that sway on the mountain top,

I am the sun flowers that reach for the sky.

I am the pencil that writes all day and night,

I am the soil that gets turned by the plow on a farm,

I am the Robin that tweets every morning,

I am the stool that people sit on.

I am the air that people breath,

I am the bag that people can put their stuff in.

I am the stairs that people climb,

I am the window that people can look through.

I am the magazine that people look at,

I am the glasses that people wear to protect their eyes.

I am the ceiling that is high above,

I am the door that people walk through.

I am life, gods creation.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
I am back. I am now working on another story. This new one is a short story.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Hey people, I am so sorry that I have been writing, but here is something I wrote two years ago.

“As time goes by, weeks, years and even centuries, we need to remember
that we only get one life to live. Fires burn, ice melts, people grow old, never young. But in the time that passes, there will only be one that will survive the rest. As in a story, one says great power comes great responsibility.

If one makes a mistake, they will never learn unless they try, but when one tries his best they are able to fix their mistake. If he doesn’t try, he will not learn. As in one story, where everyone lives but in an another story, people then die for another. Life comes and goes.”
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Wonderland Forever | 15 comments love your writing!


Wonderland Forever | 15 comments I love writing too.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
I have soo many books in progress right now.


Wonderland Forever | 15 comments I write a lot of poetry. Most inspired by songs


Wonderland Forever | 15 comments one is inspired by the Beatles


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I wanna hold your hand...


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Clearly you know nothing about The Beatles.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Please if you are going to comment, please do it about my work. Thank you.


Wonderland Forever | 15 comments sorry


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
it is fine, I have to go, but I will be back when ever I can.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
I am writing another book.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Hey, I am writing a new book!! This one has the best idea ever!!!


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Thanks. and the quote, those are my words.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
And then I have another book in progress, I started it yesterday.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Yes, I do.

It is okay. I am fine with your comments.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Okay, this is my best idea ever for a book!!!!


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
So I decided to make a story about Jack Frost being a girl. I can't tell you the details, but she has a younger sister, mother, her actual name is Jacqueline and a father who left (for some reason. I can't tell you that part.)


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
yeah, I am on, the third/fourth chapter.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Here is a little sneakpeek of my new story,


I ran through the forest, leaves crunched under my feet.
“Jack, where are you?” My mother called as she stood at the doorway to the cottage. Running as fast I can, I spread my arms and pretended that I could fly.
“JACK!” My mind could tell that my she was not happy.
I jumped over logs, rocks and tree roots. My legs led me through an open field. In the distance I could see smoke coming from the chimney.
Just as I could see the cottage, my little sister Annabelle ran towards me. “Jackeey!” She held out her hands to me. “Tomorrow will you teach me how to how to skate?” she asked.
“Sure Annabelle after lunch okay?” My sister nodded as I hugged her.

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When we finally arrived, I helped my sister put her new skates on. I took my shoes off so that I was bare foot and that I couldn’t fall onto the ice. I helped my sister onto the frozen pond.
“Jack, I am scared.” I noticed that her knees were trembling.
“Annabelle, I am right here to help you. How about we play a game.” Annabelle smiled. The ice started to crack as she started to take a step towards me. “Don’t move!” She nodded as I grabbed my stick and used it to pull her towards my as I fell forwards. I stood up just as the ice broke and I fell straight down.
“Jackeey!” I could hear her cry, but her words faded.

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My sister walked across the floor to the stairs. “Annabelle, it is me Jack.” She walked through me. I watched her and then flew up to her room and looked around until I saw a piece of paper on her desk. I looked at it and started to read.

Dear Jackey,
Why did you have to die? I am scared. My life will be different. There will be no one to talk to. You make everything fun like it is a game. My friends will probably just ignore me. If you could read this, please give me a sign that you are okay and alive or you are an angel and is supposed to be watching over me like a guardian. I believe in you...

I heard the door open. I quickly flew up to a corner and continued to read.


...Have you ever seen father? Mother told me that he left when you were little. I hope you have seen him. If you have and still are alive, please tell me.

Love Annabelle,


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
somewhat, all of theses sections are from chapter one, but there are some parts I did not want to put it in.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Writing another story!!


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
thanks, I don't know what will be the end, but there is guy, his name is Shou and he is a master at all the martial arts. He is a ninja that takes out bad guys and everyone does not know that it is him. He is also from Japan.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
yeah, but I don't know what the plot should be.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
From post 61, I have figured out what the story is. This is a secret. I will post it on Goodreads soo, but not that soon. Once I finished writing it, that is.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Here is something that I did when i was little:

THUNDER

Oh the rain pouring down on the roof like buckets full of water.
Oh the thunder booming and clattering against the windows as the children watch from the inside of the building.
Oh the lightning is so bright and loud like the thunder that comes after it.
Oh as the rain comes down like a giant drumming on a very very very very loud drum.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
here is another one:

Tortus

I am a turtle nice & slow & steady. I take my time on every thing & I’m very old. I don’t walk very fast & I don’t walk very slow. I like to walk in the sun & not in the shade but the nice cool relaxing sun. I never run. I walk very slow and I take my time. When a predator sees me I don’t run but I hide in my hard safe shell so no predator can eat me. I like to sleep all day & night.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
A couple post earlier, I kind of changed it. in stead of reading that part, I will put in what I have now. Or just skip to the next post after this one!!


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Actually, here is my first chapter. I will be deleting the other chapters...


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Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 163 comments Mod
Today is the first of January. Just a couple days ago, I moved here, to Palos Verdes, California.I moved here from Japan because I needed a change. If you want to say that.

I ran my fingers through my hair as I walked through the town streets. I turned the corner and continued until I got to a convenient store. A bell rang as I opened the door. “You know what you are looking for?” The clerk asked me.

“Yeah.” I grabbed an apple from the fruit basket and paid. I took a bite of the apple and sat down on the counter.

“So, you new around here?” I took another bite and looked at him.

“Yep, I moved here on Saturday.” My phone rang; I looked at it. “I have to go. I will see you tomorrow.” I ran out of the store and down the street towards the dojo in the mall. I ran inside and towards the locker room. Before I could get to the changing room, I took down the sign that said “sold” on it. I paused when I saw some kids walk by. When I looked at them, they stare back at me. I sighed and went to back of the dojo changed into my ninja uniform and went to the back room and found out that someone was going to rob a store. I waited until nightfall.

Just after I ran into the dojo, some kids were talking about an exchanged student, which was me.

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The first day of school for me another school day for everyone else. I moved here in the middle of the year. A girl sat down in the back of the room with her two friends, “I heard that there is a new kid coming into our school.”

“What do you think this kid looks like?” The boy with the glasses and clean hair cut responded as he turned around and he saw me, “Sarah, I believe that is the new kid right there.” Sarah looked up to where I was standing. She stared at me.
“Mike, I think that this is the same guy we saw at the mall. But why did he buy the dojo when he is just our age and it looks like he is alone. I think. I am probably wrong on that.” She watched the new kid.

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The next day I walked into school and saw everyone was whispering. This was my first day here so I did not know anyone’s names. I found my homeroom and walked in. I could sense that everyone was staring at me. Including the three I saw in the mall. I shook the feeling off.

“Just last night some guy robbed a store and then someone stopped him. They were all in black, I think. Well, everyone is wondering who this mystery person is. Everyone is talking about it. It is even on the news.” The girl jumped up a down, but then turned around and saw me. I walked towards them.

“So does anyone have a clue who this person is?” I asked them. The three of them shook their heads.

“No, not yet.” The other boy that was sitting next to the girl who I later learn that her name was Sarah.
I looked down at the floor.“Really?”
“Okay, class, I will be taking the attendance now.” The teacher rattled on until she got to my name, “Shou Wakayashi.” The teacher tried to sound out my name.

“Here. It is is actually Waka-bay-ashi. That is how you say it. It is Japanese.” I sat down in the back and looked out the window. What am I going to do? I thought to myself.

“Mr. Wakabayashi will you tell us a little about yourself.” The teacher asked me. I stood up as everyone turned around and looked at me.

“I Shou. I just moved here. I...I ...any questions?” I looked around the room .
“Where did you move from?” One of the girls in the front asked me.
I looked at her, “Japan.”

“So you were born there?” I nodded. “Cool. “

“Hey, I have a question. “ I looked at Sarah. “ If you moved here from Japan , then why do you have a dojo?”

I stood there wided eyed, “To... um..you know to do karate.” I gulped. I had to stay quiet about why I was here. I turning my head, I stared outside and sighed.

“Shou, are you okay?” Sarah walked up to me and placed her hand on my shoulder. “It is okay if you do not want to tell us.”

“Now class, you will be continuing on a story about a dragon and how he did not want to become leader of his clan so he was sent down to the earth to learn how to, but he refused...” I looked up when I heard what the teacher said. “Shou, something the matter? Do you know the story, which you probably do because it was a legend probably where you came from, right?”

“I guess yeah. That is also not what I heard.”

“If you heard it differently then we would all like to all hear it.” I nodded .

“Sure.” I stood up and started from the beginning. “ About a thousand years from this day, a baby dragon was born, his name was Sha’oren Drakani. This dragon was not just no ordinary dragon, he could turn into a human as well. He is the dragon of Eternity and life. Ever since he was born, he was teased because, he was different, anyways, one night his mother...” I turned my head towards the window as a tear ran down my left cheek. “...told him that he was going to be the leader of the clan. Tthe clan was called, The Moonlight Ancients.” I pulled my sleeve down so no one could see my birthmark which ran from the wrist of my left arm and went to the down my back and around my body. “ So he was sent, well that is what people thought, actually I...I think that he decided to go down to the ancient temple to see if it was true, but he did not know that the master was his grandfather and the leader of the clan. The dragon refused when it was true, but after a couple nights after he arrived...” I paused there. "I am sorry, I can not finish.” I picked up my bag and left the room. I ran straight towards my locker. I turned a corner and stopped at locker 2341. “Why did I have to say anything. I was going to tell everyone about the meeting.” I looked at the picture with Akio, grandpa and I. We all looked happy. I placed it back in my locker and bowed to it. “I will always will love you gramps.” A tear ran down my cheek. I looked up and saw Sarah running towards me and her two friends following her. I had to not let her see that I was crying.

Sarah ran out of the room and down the hall. She followed the new kid. “Shou, are you okay?” She saw me bow to my locker. “ Shou?” She called.

I looked up, “I am fine.” I stared at the picture again. Sarah finally arrived at my locker. She looked over my shoulder,.

“What are you looking at in your locker and why did run out of the classroom?” She asked.

“I am not looking at anything and why should you care why I ran out.” Another tear ran down my cheek.

“Shou, it is okay if you miss your friends in Japan, but now you have friends here now. I am Sarah, The nerd here is John and the other one is Mike. All three of us saw you run into the dojo. I was wondering about the dojo and when you ran in there. You seem in a bit of a hurry. Also, if you do karate, we would all love to watch you.” The girl Sarah asked me. “Also we should get back to class.”

“I am fine. You go back to class. I will be right behind you. “ Sarah nodded and walked back to class with both MIke and John. I stayed behind and meditated for a couple seconds and then headed back to class.

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“Mr. Wakabayashi, are you listening?” The teacher stood over my desk.

“Yes ma’am.” I answered.

“Okay class, instead of teaching you today, we are going to watch the news.” Ms. Jensen turned the TV on. I did not look at it, but then decided to look at the screen.

“Just last night someone tried to rob a clothes store, but when the police arrived at the scene, the robber was found tied up to a telephone pole. No one knows if he did it himself or what.” The women showed us a smile. She then puts a hand to her ear, “Wait, I got some new information. Just in that the police found a note on the pole above the robber.” I smirked, but did not show it to anyone. “It says here, ‘Here is your criminal. I am a friend.’ Looks like this person is a friend. we will give you more information when we can.” The woman smiled at us then the forecast came on. Ms. Jensen turned the TV off.

“Okay, do what you would like to do from now to the end of class.” The three looked at me, they whispered something and then looked at me again.

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