Young Writers discussion

Hi, my name is Grace and I'm 14. I like to read (clearly) and take photography. I use to write a lot when I was little, but as I grew up I stopped. I just recently wrote the first chapter to this story I'm working on called The Hills with The Piercing Blue Eyes I'd love some feedback from others :)

The Hills With The Piercing Blue Eyes

I loved it! But you have to tell me why and what the hills are the min. I start reading. I was a little confused from that. :)

"I used to write a lot when I was little"

*coughs*

Aren't you still little? ;)

Me?

No, Grace. She's 14.

So I guess you too! XD

you just confused me.

Grace has in her first topic "I used to write a lot when I was little." She also states that she is fourteen. Taylor was teasing her by replying "Aren't you still little?"

Because you interjected, he extended the phrase to include you, having assumed that you, too, are young.

oh! ok so we are young and he is old (another inside joke) thank you. i am blond under this brown. :D

We all are, at times.

not just me? good!

LOL...I'm gonna go calm myself down now...that was great.

are you calm now? it has been like 2 hours and 42 min.

Sorry...I had piano and work.

Wow! You take piano?

Going on thirteen years.

I want to take lessons badly. Guess what!

It's the best thing in the world...next to writing and Hazel.

What?

I'm watching another movie

Which one?

Batman the 1st. Scarecrow is so funny

Haven't seen it...though Scarecrow is a fantastic comic book villain!

He is all like "would you like to see my mask?" And everybody else is like " AHHHHH!!!!!"

What's you're favorite movie?

(Sorry to not respond for so long. I just fell down a flight of stairs due to vetigo.)

What! Are you ok?

Just a nasty headache messing with my balance is all. I didn't get hurt -- carpet all the way down. It just woke me up more than I would have liked. :)

I'm sorry! Hope you feel better!

Hahaha...I wish. :) These headaches are because of a medical condition. Or rather, the treatment. The aches are a small price to pay when compared to what I could struggle with -- being a vegetable or not alive at all.

But again, what is your favorite movie?

Um... Idk I only have dislikes. I love the one I am seeing now and the rest of the batman movies. I also love inception but not as much

Have you seen Thor?

I want to

Sooooooooooo good. It was the most emotionally moving for me. LOKI IS MY FAVORITE MOVIE CHARACTER IN ALL WAYS! He and I just...relate.

Most emotionally moving out of all the Marvel flicks, I mean.

WOW now I have to see it. My movie is over. I'm going to go through my fav parts.