Codename Fairy Godmother Fans discussion

I really enjoyed writing this chapter. It starts off with our kick-butt Huntress, Agent Thunder, waiting on her prey (a poor unsuspecting Homosap (Homos Sapiens)). I wanted to quickly identify Agent Thunder's diabolical characteristics so the reader would know she was not your usual bright-eyed, everyone-likes-me protagonist. I wanted to write a story about a protagonist who was hard to like because, let's face it, the world isn't all filled with kind, sweet-hearted people. I wanted to tell the story of the a-hole, the rough-around-the-edges character. They have a story too.

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I enjoyed reading this first chapter as I am tired of reading about characters who sparkle! I was looking for that raw edgy character that Agent Thunder brings. She kicks butt and takes names! There is nothing frilly and sparkly about Thunder. This first chapter sets the story and characters for the rest of the book. Thunder takes crap from no one and is all action first and questions later but, she sure does make this book fun to read! I wish more authors wrote like this in their first chapters!

I loved the first chapter. I loved how she was like "Where IS my target?! He'll have to pay for being late" and I'm pretty sure that if he knew she was waiting for him, he'd run away screaming. She was so kick-butt and different! Loved this chapter :]