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Once upon a time...

There lived a dragon with an old witch. They were always happy and full of joy.

But one day a stupid drooling knight visited them and demanded all their money, but his buck teeth only made them laugh.

The witch put an evil curse on the knight and banished the knight. Full of humiliation, the knight went back towards the castle an prepared an invasion.

Turns out, he was the prince in that region and his father was a wicked tyrant. His mother was a drooling old hag with buck teeth, but she had an uncanny source of power:

The king sent a full scale assault on the witch and the dragon. However, something intercepted the army.

It was the behind of an enormous giant, who was sleeping on the road. On one side of him, there was a massive lake. On the other, the Dark Forest.

They were about to surrender when the king's wife came. She said a spell that made all the obstacles disappear.

Suddenly, the ground shuddered beneath them.

The old witch came from the ground with the dragon. However, the king's wife knew all about this and ensnared the witch and the dragon.

But they exploded into green flame and disappeared.

The king's wife cursed and sent a reward throughout the entire nation for the capture of the dragon and witch. She wanted the two "convicted" criminals jailed.

Unfortunately, the prison wasn't strong enough to withhold them.