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Haylie Bain | 9 comments One day back in the 1500 there was a 19 year old girl named Mary
Mary mother was very ill and soon too die so when her mother died everyone panic and said Marley her older sister will be queen with upset Mary a lot so in the middle of the night Mary walked into Marley room with a knife and Marley said ''what the hell Mary what are you doing here and why do you have a knife'' Mary smiled and said ''sorry'' and cut her head off and Mary grabbed the knife and ran
The next day Mary woke up and heard the news and laugh and then came out of her room and heard them saying Maria will be queen Mary ran into her bedroom called her best friend and told her everything and then her friend hung up and late that night Mary walked into Maria room and when Marie woke up she said ''Hey what's wrong Mary i need to go to sleep" she pulled out the knife and stabbed her in the heart
that morning Mary woke up happy then heard the news she was too young her dad would do it himself witch got Mary upset so Mary grabbed a big bag and waited till night and then she looked at her dad's face saying i can't do it but then she said i WANT IT and woke up her dad she killed him put him in the bag and throw him in the lake and teared up and then went inside in the morning Emily (Mary best friend) told the village everything they took knife ropes and everything and they killed Mary and then Emily became Queen witch made BLOODY MARY THE GHOST very upset...........


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