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message 1: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
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message 2: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai looks around, the stars were shining bright, she thinks of Will and a single tear goes down her face.


message 3: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Spencer looks at her friend at bites her lip. "Will?" she asks.


message 4: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai looks at them and nods. I'm worried....


message 5: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Spencer offers her a smile. "Hey," she says. "Will is always okay." It was true.


message 6: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai nods and bites into her lip.


message 7: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Spencer looks at Al. "My friend, her brother," she tells him. "Remember that thing I said about keeping up...?" She grins.


message 8: by Halle (new)

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Spencer grin widens as Mai smiles too. 'Crisis averted' she thinks.


message 9: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai's mouth becomes small and she gets up, I'm gunna go for a walk, be back in a bit


message 10: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Spencer bites her lip again. "Okay, don't be long," she says.


message 11: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai lets out a silent sigh. She walks away calmly at first, and when she was farther away, she bust into a run, tears streaming down her face, she wish she could yell. She just wanted to call Will's name.


message 12: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Will narrowly avoids being hit by and odd yellow object. "The Hell?" he says.


message 13: by Halle (new)

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Spencer turns to Al. "Is Al short for something?" she asks, ignoring his question.


message 14: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai finds the stream and finds herself ancle deep in it. She falls into the water and sobs, she just wishes she made sound. Why can't she make sound!? Will can....


message 15: by Halle (new)

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Spencer frowns. "Well I like Alex better," she says. "So Alex, I understand her, because she's one of my best friends."


message 16: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai shivers in the water.


message 17: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Spencer snorts. "Okay," she says. "Hang out with her brother for a year, meet her, be with both of them for another two years, and should be an expert." She laughs.


message 18: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) ((BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!))


message 19: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Spencer shrugs. "You think I'm kidding, but that was my life story," she tells him.


message 20: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai hears something behind her and flips around, her eyes screaming, Will!


Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ Echo walked over to the fire with a few blankets and a pillow, she lay out one, then slid in, laying another ontop of her and resting her head on a pillow of pure white.


message 22: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Spencer looks at him. "Oh, I get it," she says, wiggling her eyebrows. "Will is gonna kick your ass."


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

Saul entered the camp .


Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ "Saul, I'm cold" she smiled with her puppy dog eyes, calling him to her.


message 25: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Spencer shrugs. "It's your funeral." she says. "I will refrain from saying 'I told you so' as the light leaves your eyes." She shudders. "I'm much to graphic."


message 26: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai hears other people but still stares at the sound. Then, a black figure comes out. Tears fill her eyes as she runs to it, Will!


message 27: by [deleted user] (last edited Nov 18, 2012 06:43PM) (new)

Hazel-bloom wrote: ""Saul, I'm cold" she smiled with her puppy dog eyes, calling him to her."

Saul went to Echo and laid next to her he held her tightly in his arms .


message 28: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Spencer tilts her head. "Mobs?" she echoes.


message 29: by Hazel ~ Avalon ~ (last edited Nov 18, 2012 06:41PM) (new)

Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ "Much better" she smiled, lightly kissing Saul on the tip of his nose, then on the lips.


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

Saul returned the kiss but more pationatly . " I love you ". He whispered into her ear.


Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ "Tomorrow it has been 24 months." she smiled and whispered back, "that is around 730 days we have been together"


message 32: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
"What for?" she asks. "Oh, gag," she says, hearing her brother and Echolette.


message 33: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Right as Mai reaches the shadow, she notices it isn't Will. She lets out a silent scream as she sees the bloody man infront of her. She falls back and starts running through the woods.


message 34: by Hazel ~ Avalon ~ (last edited Nov 18, 2012 06:48PM) (new)

Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ "yea" she smiled at Spencer "Shut up you"


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

Hazel-bloom wrote: ""Tomorrow it has been 24 months." she smiled and whispered back, "that is around 730 days we have been together""

" Yeah , time sure flys ". Saul said sweetly.


message 36: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai looks back and sees the shadow gone. She lets out a silent sigh and walks back to camp, not noticing her cut arm.


Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ "Maybe" she laughed at Al "Its 2 years tho, so yea"


message 38: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Spencer doesn't seem to hear him. "Mai's been gone too long," she say, panicked. "I'm going to find her." She stands up and smooths her dress. "Come on," she says, grabbing the inside of Alex's elbow.


message 39: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai sobs quietly leaning against a tree, Where are you Will?


Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ "Be safe, send an owl or dove if anything happens" she yelled to Spencer before she lef with Al


message 41: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Spencer and Alex quietly step through the woods. "Mai?" Spencer calls uncertainly. "Mai, come one! I'm worried!" A twig snaps to their left, and Spencer shrinks against Alex.


message 42: by [deleted user] (last edited Nov 18, 2012 06:54PM) (new)

Hazel-bloom wrote: ""Be safe, send an owl or dove if anything happens" she yelled to Spencer before she lef with Al"

" What's wrong"? Saul asked.


Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ "Mai has been gone for to long" she lay on her back, "Did you know we are in bed together?" she laughed.


message 44: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai hears people coming and shrinks into the shadows. But with her white hair, and dress, she glows.


message 45: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
Spencer lets out a shaky laugh. "It's probably nothing," she says, mostly to herself. "Mai just lost track of time." She looks at Alex. "Right? Of course," she answers herself.


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

Hazel-bloom wrote: ""Mai has been gone for to long" she lay on her back, "Did you know we are in bed together?" she laughed."

" Heheh. Your right". Saul said sweetly.


message 47: by Kate Kid (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) Mai looks around, she sees Al and Spencer.


message 48: by Halle (last edited Nov 18, 2012 07:00PM) (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
"Mai!" Spencer says and rushes forward to hug her. She seems shaken up. "What happened?" she asks.


message 49: by Hazel ~ Avalon ~ (last edited Nov 18, 2012 07:01PM) (new)

Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ Echolette kissed his and rolled with him, "I love you more than life" she said as she laid on Saul.


message 50: by Halle (new)

Halle (thepotterhead) | 483 comments Mod
(( Goodreads over capacity? Oh, hell no. ))


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