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message 1: by ѕтαяк (last edited Jan 10, 2013 11:37AM) (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments Just a bunch of creepy, dark hallways that no one goes to anymore. They have a lot of broken glass and other dangerous things in here, so don't go in without shoes. Most people don't go here, so it is a nice place for people who need to be alone.

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Onyxia The Dragon | 6 comments Kato walked down one of the halls silently.She hummed a small tune as she stared out one of the broken windows.Sighing,she picked a place that wasn't covered with too much glass and sat down carefully.


message 3: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments Harmony walked in, taking in her surroundings and listening to the crunching sound of broken glass at her feet. She was breathing heavily and rubbing her arm where there was now a nasty needle mark.


Onyxia The Dragon | 6 comments Kato quietly lifted her head up as she heard the crunching noises of broken glass.She turned her head and saw Harmony coming down the hall.She stared at her with curious eyes.


message 5: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments Harmony's eyes became red with the sudden alert and she swiftly took a step back. "hello" she said casually.


Onyxia The Dragon | 6 comments "H-Hello."Kato responded quietly."I'm Kato..."


message 7: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments "uhh.... Harmony" she chuckled " Still stroking her bleeding arm.


Onyxia The Dragon | 6 comments Kato's eyes drifted towards Harmony's arm and she frowned.


message 9: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments she stopped smiling "the doctors just gave me a checkup. she looked grim. This was just so I would not remember what happened" she swayed a little.


message 10: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments The room started to swirl and she leaned against the wall.


message 11: by Bailey (last edited Nov 21, 2012 10:52AM) (new)

Bailey Reece (baileyreece7) | 1659 comments Mod
Suddenly a door swung open. two girls walked in, one with long brown hair, and the other with short blond. The taller one, with brown hair, spoke first. "I'm Amanda, and this is Anastasia." Her large green eyes sent a piercing gaze to the other girls. "concentrate." she thought to herself, "You can do this."


message 12: by Molly (last edited Nov 21, 2012 10:55AM) (new)

Molly  (mturner1138) | 46 comments Mod
Anastasia stood a little behind Amanda, her face turning red as she felt the eyes of the other girls focusing on her. With a jolt of horror she felt her left hand start to disappear. Crapcrapcrapcrap she thought as slowly, her entire left arm vanished.


message 13: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments Harmony, shakily got up and clutched her arm tightly. She then turned into a cat and attempted to flee, but her hurt arm mad e her slow.


message 14: by Bailey (new)

Bailey Reece (baileyreece7) | 1659 comments Mod
"Anastasia!" exclaimed Amanda, "i thought you said you could control it!!" with this she broke her gaze with a look of disappointment.


message 15: by Molly (new)

Molly  (mturner1138) | 46 comments Mod
Anastasia shrank a little under the ferocious gaze of the other girl. "S-sorry," she squeaked. "Y-you introduced me and I just..." As she spoke, her left foot disappeared. "D-damn," she muttered, and twisted her face in a look of concentration. Slowly, bit by bit, her foot reappeared, then her shoulder. Anastasia blew out the breath she'd been holding. "It kinda worked...."


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Bailey Reece (baileyreece7) | 1659 comments Mod
"Now look what you did..." Amanda muttered under her breath, "i almost had it. if you could have refrained for two more se-" her voice caught in her throat. a booming voice projected over the intercom, "AMANDA WHITESTONE, REPORT TO THE OPERATING ROOM IMMEDIATELY."


message 17: by Molly (new)

Molly  (mturner1138) | 46 comments Mod
Anastasia looked at Amanda in a panic. "'Manda, you can't go! They'll do t-things..." She went white under her freckles. "W-what if they hurt you..."


message 18: by Bailey (last edited Nov 21, 2012 11:31AM) (new)

Bailey Reece (baileyreece7) | 1659 comments Mod
Her posture sank as she heard the announcement. "Then I'll have to deal I guess." She whispered. She tried to seem confident although it was obvious she wasn't. As she fiddled with her long, dark hair, the loud voice repeated the command.


message 19: by Molly (new)

Molly  (mturner1138) | 46 comments Mod
"Let me come with you," Anastasia blurted suddenly. She felt her shoulder start to disappear again, but she didn't care. "I'll go invisible, they won't even know I'm there. Please, you're my only friend!"


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Bailey Reece (baileyreece7) | 1659 comments Mod
Amanda set her gaze once more on the girl across the hall, this time more intensely. "C'mon... What are you thinking about girl...?" she murmured.


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Bailey Reece (baileyreece7) | 1659 comments Mod
A vision of colors flashed before Amanda's eyes. She did it. She succeeded. What she saw disturbed her immensely. She saw only herself and Anastasia bursting through the door, looking wild. "Great. so that's what this chick thinks of me." she thought, "Well- It's a start."


message 22: by Rachael (new)

Rachael Mae (rmae-create) Evelyn had been wondering the halls, when she happened to run into a group of other teens. "What the..."


message 23: by Molly (new)

Molly  (mturner1138) | 46 comments Mod
"Amanda?" said Anastasia, uncomfortably aware of the girl who had just appeared. "Amanda, if we don't go then they'll come looking..." Her shoulder was gone again and her left leg was starting to disappear as well under the gaze of the new girl. "Amanda...."


message 24: by Bailey (last edited Nov 23, 2012 08:07AM) (new)

Bailey Reece (baileyreece7) | 1659 comments Mod
"Annie, I'm sorry, but it's not safe for you to come..." she trailed off as she spoke, "They could catch you." Amanda looked away from her little friend and set her gaze once more of the two other girls, "What are you looking at?" she snarled; she was not in the mood for introductions, not after the cat girl fled.


message 25: by Molly (new)

Molly  (mturner1138) | 46 comments Mod
Anastasia held her breath and slowly, her whole body turned invisible. "See?" she said, a note of triumph in her voice. "They won't catch me because they won't even know I'm there. Please, you can't alone..." Her voice was now issuing from an empty patch of air.


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Bailey Reece (baileyreece7) | 1659 comments Mod
"But you'll see things, and-- lose it..." She struggled to get the last words out. Her long hair gleamed in the dim light as she slowly started to walk towards the doorway, not looking at Anastasia.


message 27: by Molly (new)

Molly  (mturner1138) | 46 comments Mod
Anastasia hurried after her. "I'll stay outside the room, I promise. I just don't want to let you go alone...."


message 28: by Bailey (new)

Bailey Reece (baileyreece7) | 1659 comments Mod
"FINE!" she snapped, "we have to hurry though. so come on!!"


message 29: by Molly (new)

Molly  (mturner1138) | 46 comments Mod
"O-okay," she said, trying to keep pace with her friend. "I'll be right behind you."


message 30: by Rachael (new)

Rachael Mae (rmae-create) As two of the girls hurried away, Evelyn wandered off in the opposite direction.


message 31: by Bailey (new)

Bailey Reece (baileyreece7) | 1659 comments Mod
Amanda stopped in her tracks, causing Anastasia to bump into her. "Wait! You! I didn't catch you're name.." She shouted across the hall.


message 32: by Rachael (new)

Rachael Mae (rmae-create) "I'm Evelyn!" She yelled.


message 33: by Bailey (new)

Bailey Reece (baileyreece7) | 1659 comments Mod
"Amanda, but i bet you already knew that, you know, the intercom." she replied with a wink.


Ʈʜэ MɐÐɲΣ§Ꭶ ᏊརƭᏲƗϞ (death_of_the_rebelz) Mason was dropped of in the old hallways by the orderlies. He looked around trying to recall his way back to Elizabeth.


message 35: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments Harmony staggered in, clutching the wall and moaning. Anyone in the hall could have thought that she was drunk, or perhaps a wandering spirt roaming around the old, forgotten hallways.


Ʈʜэ MɐÐɲΣ§Ꭶ ᏊརƭᏲƗϞ (death_of_the_rebelz) Mason turned a corner and saw Harmony stumbling about. "Are you alright?" he asked as he moved forward to help her.


message 37: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments "the op-op-operations room..." Her eyes filled with tears. "Never, ever go there..." she collapsed, shaking on the ground.


Ʈʜэ MɐÐɲΣ§Ꭶ ᏊརƭᏲƗϞ (death_of_the_rebelz) Mason keeled down to help her. He pulled off his jacket and wrapped it around her.


message 39: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments Harmony clutched his hand. "what happened?" she shook violently. "Terrible Terrible things..." she trailed off and showed him her shoulder blade, which had zigzag lines running all trough it.


Ʈʜэ MɐÐɲΣ§Ꭶ ᏊརƭᏲƗϞ (death_of_the_rebelz) Mason held her hand, comfortingly. He was afraid to do more, he knew how his sister reacted to such things "everything is going to be fine" he said calmly.


message 41: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments "Nothing was fine in the first place!" she screamed, then hung her head. " I'm sorry, they put me.... they put me in that dreaded room. Everything is so weird, funny...the walls won't stop moving..."


Ʈʜэ MɐÐɲΣ§Ꭶ ᏊརƭᏲƗϞ (death_of_the_rebelz) "I know, but it is going to be okay. We are going to patch up your cuts and you can get some sleep. no one is making you go back there" he was used to being yelled at.


message 43: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments Harmony tried shakily to get up, but failed, and just collapsed back into the boys arms, she sighed. " I can't even get up" she said shakily.


Ʈʜэ MɐÐɲΣ§Ꭶ ᏊརƭᏲƗϞ (death_of_the_rebelz) "Here I'll help you" he brought her arm over his shoulder. He wrapped one arm around her waist and helped her slowly get to her feet.


message 45: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments She staggered, But his strong arms helped her up in no time, and once again, she was up on her feet. "thank you." she smiled "I don't know how long I would have stayed here if you hadn't come along." She blushed. "Hi, I am Harmony"


Ʈʜэ MɐÐɲΣ§Ꭶ ᏊརƭᏲƗϞ (death_of_the_rebelz) "Mason" he slowly moved so he was standing across from her. He was ready to catch her if she fell again.


message 47: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments "well, once again, thank you. What is your...." she tuned out for a few seconds. "Oh! what is your, you know power. Gift. What ever you want to call it?" She looked away, obviously embarrassed.


Ʈʜэ MɐÐɲΣ§Ꭶ ᏊརƭᏲƗϞ (death_of_the_rebelz) "People's powers don't work on me, it is not very impressive" he shrugged.


message 49: by ѕтαяк (new)

ѕтαяк (cometocloseanduwillloseafinger) | 2293 comments She nodded "that might come in handy some day though" she smiled, amused " you never know".


Ʈʜэ MɐÐɲΣ§Ꭶ ᏊརƭᏲƗϞ (death_of_the_rebelz) "It hasn't so far but I'll keep my fingers crossed" he crossed his fingers and held them up for her to see.


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