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My fantasy/youth novel is situated in a magic land called Lesuth. Men and Lesuthians have fogotten about each other a long time ago until the day when the human twins Maika and Alexander cross the border on their daily way home from school. They meet The Child Without Name which has conquered Lesuth after being punished from his world and now spreads fear and fury among the Lesuthians. Will the twins find a way home again before The Child Without Name destroys the last chance for them to return and they are stuck in this wondersome place?

what do you think? does this sound promising enough?

there are a lot of things that I haven't figured out yet, anyone care to help out? :)

Are you still writing this? If so, I think it has good potential and can turn out amazing.

I would love to help.

yes, this project ist still alive in my mind. Thanks for your comment, I am currently collecting pictures of potential places in this mysterious world. :) do you have any ideas? Any must-haves/must-happens/etc.?

I'm not sure. I'll defiantly think about it, though. You may want to watch this video by Ellen Brock. She explains some things about world building in his one She's an editor.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KYcHn...