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Jane felt bored after school, she walked in the club wearing a black dress with tights, her brown hair shining with the lights of the club. She smiled and walked to the dancefloor, starting to dance


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Jane smiled as she danced, the music going through her body.


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She bumped into a guy that was on the dancefloor 'Sprry' she said as she looked up to him


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She smiled 'I'm Jane' She shouted through the noise


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She nodded 'Wanna dance...with me?' She shouted embarrassed a bit for asking someone to dance with her


message 6: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 15, 2012 12:33PM) (new)

She smiled and took his hands guiding him to her. Then stopped when they were face to face, she blushed. Forgetting how to do dance then remembered how to after a few seconds.


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She smirked 'Not bad' she said to him


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She laughed 'Cause I practice everyday, every night this is where I'll always be'


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She smiled 'Nice...I'm not a bad kicker myself' she laughed


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She shrugged 'At least you. Can move'


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She laughed 'Thanks, Im gonna get a drink...you want anything?' She asked


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She nodded and went to a stool asking for a coke


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Jane put her hair to the side and drank her coke slowly


message 14: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 16, 2012 03:39PM) (new)

She finished her coke and sighed, then looked over her shoulder and saw Walter.


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She smiled and waved back then payed for her coke, standing up and began walking to them


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((Is it Walter or Dylan? I'm confused))

Jane smiled, 'Hi..'


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Jane smiled at Jake 'Im Jane' she extended her hand


message 18: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 17, 2012 03:51PM) (new)

She laughed 'I smell that bad?' She joked and looked at Dylan 'Dont answer that' she smiled.


message 19: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 18, 2012 08:22PM) (new)

She smiled, 'Wow, never heard that one before..' she winked


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She laughed softly 'That was pretty weird...and they say you've seen it all' she smiled. Then someone bumped her from behind causing her to fall into Dylan's arms 'Sorry' she said, starting to pull away


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She smirked, 'I've bumped into you twice...this is going great' she joked


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She laughed as well then looked around


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Jane smiled at Jake's girlfriend, 'I'm Jane' she said then looked at the stage, listening to the song


message 24: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 22, 2012 02:01AM) (new)

She smiled 'Sure, lead the way, Dylan'


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She smiled at him, and danced happily with him


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She pulled him to her and smiled 'Just incase' she said


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She danced, she never had before, her moves were swift and smooth, it made people stare


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She shrugged 'Let them..I like to dance' she laughed


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She smirked, then the DJ stopped the music 'Any requests from the crowd tonight?' She rolled her eyes 'Again' she mumbled


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She sighed and waited, then a salsa came on 'This request is for Miss Jane from Anonymous', Jane looked at Dylan and raised an eyebrow


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She nodded 'Jane is my name but who asked for it..' She looked around, 'Looks like I have to please the crowd' she smiled


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She smiled and took his hand then started dancing the salsa


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((Sure!!))

She danced around him, smiling


message 34: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 22, 2012 07:00PM) (new)

She put her arms around his neck smiling.


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((Then make one!!! Merry Xmas btw!! :) ))

She never thought of havif a salsa partner, she thought most boys couldn't do it...but Walter did it fine.


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She panted and smirked, she bowed then laughed


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She laughed even more, taking her hand in his


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'that was great' she laughed then spun around smiling


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She smiled at him 'Thanks for the great dance'


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She curtsied and smiled sweetly


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She nodded 'Its on me' she smiled


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She ran to the counter 'One coke and whatever this gentleman wants, it's on me' she said to the bartender


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She groaned 'Damn so close' she smirked


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She rolled her eyes 'And I'm guessing that how you get some many girls?' She said


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She laughed 'Thats what I thought'


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She looked at him surprised 'Im sorry...shouldn't of asked that' she looked away


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She nodded and looked down'I just thought that you had many admirers'


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She laughed 'You like any sports in particular? '


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

'Swimming as well, then maybe football'


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She smiled 'Yeah but the ocean is better than the pool for me'


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