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Ella wandered around, searching for someplace to sleep that night.
Jack made a weird face. He was tracking down Ella and the rest of the flock for the white coats. The last thing he rememberd was a horable nightmare, and also seeing his one skeleton. The white coats mest up his life so bad that when he flys you can see his(impossable to break) diamond skeleton. "Well looks like I finally found you guys.........soon this nightmare will be over".
"................................. ok I am almost put up with this!!! My leg is falling aslep and I need to move!" said Jack. Just then he spread out his wings and flew to wards Ella. When he flew he felt his skin tingle and he looked down.....he was a skeleton once agian.

"Hi, Ella" said Jack when he flew down from his hiding place. "OH ummmmmm hi ummm Jack, I did not even know you where here or that you were a live!" said Ella. "ya I gess that you would not know sence I been here and there. I thought that Orca and Sayble told you I was a live!" said Jack. "Oh ummmm they did not tell me." said Ella. "well we better chach up to them, and we better do it fast." warned Jack. "Why? Why should we go fast?" said Ella in a voice that Jack never heard from Ella. "we should go,NOW" demanded Jack. Just then Jack flew up into the sky, and his dimond skeleton reflecting the full moon.

Orca looked down,"Hey look it's Ella and Jack!"
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Orca asked Sayble,"Whatever happened to Jack and Ella?"

"Hi, Ella" said Jack when he flew down from his hiding place. "OH ummmmmm hi ummm Jack, I did not even know you where here or that you were a live!" said Ella. "ya I gess that you would not know sence I been here and there. I thought that Orca and Sayble told you I was a live!" said Jack. "Oh ummmm they did not tell me." said Ella. "well we better chach up to them, and we better do it fast." warned Jack. "Why? Why should we go fast?" said Ella in a voice that Jack never heard from Ella. "we should go,NOW" demanded Jack. Just then Jack flew up into the sky, and his dimond skeleton reflecting the full moon.

Orca looked down,"Hey look it's Ella and Jack!"

"OH ya! Lets go meet them down there." said Mike as they flew downward to Ella and Jack.
Jack looked up, and he saw to things that looked like people flying towards them. "well we dont have to find them." said Jack. "Why?" asked Ella "well for one thing they found us........"

Orca followed Mike on the long ride down.
Jack landed befor Ella,Orca, and Mike. "Hi, guys how are you!?" shouted Jack. Just then Ella landed right beside Jack. Jack felt his body tingle, and he looked down. He was back to normal.Orca and Mike landed and shook hands with Jack and Ella.

"so guys I understand that you did not tell Ella that I was alive for all thes years......Why?" said Jack.
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sayble stayed in the distance trying not to be noticed. thats what happened!!! she snarreled in her mind.
"....................SAYBLE!!!!!! COME OUT OF YOUR HIDEING PLACE! shouted Jack.........
sayble jumped. she barred her teeth and stalked out."...............Sayble, I thought that you would of known that when the white coats tested on me..........well they also gave me more power to sence things around me." said Jack. "did the white coats send you?" asked Jack?she gaped, "I CANT SEE YOU IDIOT!!!!" she screamed.

"........................oh what do you know..........................wow that is new!" Said Jack........"hummmmmmmmmm a new power? Great another thing to worey about..." Just then Jack reaperd out of the blue.
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Ella wandered around and saw a few people in the distance. ((Jack and Sayble)) She walked slowly towards them.
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"Ella, plz come here" Said Jack.
sayble snarreled, "they took my sight jack!!! im blinded for life!!" she screamed running to orca.
"that is good to know" said Jack........Just then Jack realey did dissaper..........
she hated jack. she hated him!! he never understood anything. never!!! she started to cry.
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just then Jack reaperd in a dark room.......He knew where he was, and he did not like it. "Wellcom Jack!" said a voice that made him go cold. "how is our tracking going? Have you found them? Where are they?" said ?????. ((look in the character place to find ????)) "I am feed up with this! I never want to do your dirtey work agen!" Shouted Jack. "I am so sorry to hear that" said ????. Jack could feal that where ever the white coat was....he was smiling at Jack. Just then Jack felt this pain all over and It did not stop! "YOU WILL DO AS I SAY!!!" shouted the ????. Just then everything blacked out for Jack.
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Ella sat down. "What's wrong, Sayble?" she asked kindly.
Orca and Mike went over to sit with Sayble.Just then Jack reapeard right in front of Ella, Sayble, Orca, and Mike.......he was laying on the ground like he was not alive, and he was not breathing.
sayble was balling. she missed seeing things.
Orca rubbed Sayble's back.
"Jack!" Ella cried and rushed over to him.
"uggggggggggggggggggggggggggg" said Jack in a weard way that they never heard from him. "Go, Go now!!!! There coming after you!" said Jack. Just then Jack became death white.
Mike ran over Jack now pale as a sheet.
"You ok?WOW he looks BAD!!ORCA GET OVER HERE NOW!!"
Orca came rushing over.
"OmigoodnessOmigoodness!!"She rambled.
Orca ran over to the lake ribbed apart a bit of her jeans and soaked it in water.Then she ran over to soak his forehead.His temp. was at least 102.
Jack was still kind of a live when he said "GO......th....ey.......are........com......e....ing .............after...........y...o...u........................................................................
Liza perched on a branch, high up in a pine tree, and scanned the surrounding landscape with her large, unblinking orange eyes. So empty of people. I wonder if I'm the only one that got out. She spread her snow-colored wings and took off into the air, wheeling around as she flew higher, then took off in search of food. She spotted a mouse scuttering around on the ground, made a face, and dove toward it, her feet changing into talons as she dropped rapidly toward the ground. She scooped it up in her talons and rose back up into the air, then perched back in her tree and ate the mouse raw, shuddering at the blood as it slid down her throat. Ugh, I hate those whitecoats. They made me like this. The only benefit is the stupid wings and eyesight. She sighed and stared sullenly out over the forest, wondering what had become of the other kids that had been in the School.
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Jack was very still and not moving.......had he died? Is he still alive? All thes questons were going threw the minds of Mike, Orca, Ella, and saybles.......
sayble shrieked and pushed everybody aside. this happened to her. she closed her eyes, put one hand on his temples and the ither in the air. she felt all his pain flow through her. she winced.
"ugggggggggggggggggggggg" Jack grunted in pain.
Orca rushed over to sayble and held her up.Mike didn't nudge.Mike ran over to Jack instead.
Jack opend his eyes, and got realey mad. "WHY DID YOU GUYS NOT LEAVE!!!!!!!" shouted Jack when he got up. Jack pushed Mike away so he could not help Jack up. Just then the full moon went dark......every thing was not as it should be.
Ella froze. She knew this had to be bad. Really bad.


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