The Pen Is Mightier Than The Sword discussion

Hey guys, Jasmine here! I'll post poems, short stories, and links to some stuff I already have on here. Feel free to comment and review! If you'd like to give some tips for short stories feel free to do so as well. Thanks! Hope you guys enjoy ^_^

These are a few poems that deal with different aspects of love. It's still being updated as I write more poems.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Random little poem thing I wrote during english class. Currently has no title.

Can't get you off my mind I'm going insane.
Keep trying to think, but you're the only thing on my brain.
Quit it, you're too good, I've become a fanatic,
Boy you got me feeling like a lovesick romantic.
And this poem, it sucks 'cause I'm tryna rhyme,
But boy, oh my, you're so divine.
That last line was cheesy, I've got to admit,
But cupids been shooting arrows and I've been hit.
All I can think of are these cheesy lines,
But I just can't believe that you're all mine.
Alright, I'm done, that's it, I quit.
It don't take a genius to tell me this poem is shit.

Restoration

Don't try to fix me, it's pointless,
I'm broken beyond repair.
Pieces of this broken soul,
Strewn about and crushed.
My dreams have been forgotten,
I feel like my love has fallen.
Trapped in a husk of what used to be me,
I pray for restoration.