Young Writers discussion

I write a lot and hope to be an author someday. Here is some of what i write, don't know if it is good. Give it a try, tell me what you think.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Here is my first One. It is called 'King of Shadows.'
A girl stumbles upon another universe. There are two lands there, the Sunset, and the shadow lands. The shadow lands are ruled by a Evil king. Secret that not even she could imagine. That her writing will give new meaning to reality.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

And the she was gone...
At the age of 14, she is take by a vampire.
Four years later, when she grows into her Vampire hunter staues, she find him again. SHe also makes the mistake of falling in love with him.


None of this is finished, but please read it.