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I am always fan of poems.But no matter how much I tried I still cant write poems.But if anyone can write poems post it below.Its for starters:)

In the days of old
When stories told
Meant naught to those who heard them...

I wrote this ages ago and have never been able to finish it.

In the days of old
When stories told
Meant naught to those who heard
them.
Sitting by fire
Listening elders talk
Of dragons and fire
Of angels and witches
Hearing a choir
...

I tried to finish it up,Ruth.

That's really cool!

Thanks

Follow the path of sun
You'll see the truth
Sometimes high
and sometimes low
It's just a crazy thought
Of not so good guy
But I feel that way
Why don't you'll try
Let's face the truth
Which lasts always and forever
Follow the path of sun
He is your master,the one.

That's cool! Did you write that?

I agree that it is good.

Thanks.

You are in the mess
You have no clue
Baby's in black
And you're felling blue
So What can you do?

does that even make sense?

Hi! I'm the first little piggy and I'm here to stay. Hooray hooray I built my house of hay.

first little piggy you have to go away,your house is mine for the day!

gosh...that was stupid

No no its definitely me
I bought the house and it's weeds

Lol:)

Ha

I am sick of being normal
Come on try to kill me
Bring some tsunami
in the blue sea.
Make the tides destroy all
Come on beat me to death
Change me to abnormal
Make the all sanity fall
Come on try to kill me:)

Why is everything you write so dark. But nevertheless it was good.

I am dark.I cant help it.I love pain.

Come on try to kill me
make me go on my knee
Change me to monster
Let me rule the world
Throw me from the high
Tell me I am a kite
I will try to fly
Tell me I am a fish
I will try to swim
Come on change me
make me forget that and this
Clear all my records
Make them bad and worse
Come on COME ON

Sing into my heart
Brand new start
Sing into my life
Make no strife

Dance onto the highway
Dance into broadway
Fame has no limits baby
Make me a star

Fame is not as you think
You have to dress pink
And thats horrible dress
You are gonna sink

You can dress in black
Or a sack
Fame is whatever you want it to be
Yeah!

You shall see!

Dress in black or blue
You have to smile
Even when in pain
All of this for fame

O.K. I'll admit
Fame is pain causing
It sucks you in with out pausing
But You can smile
Whatever you do

You cant smile
You have to smile
Holding back tears
All is in fear
Is my dress OK
Is there paparazzi around
In a circle round and round

Yeahhh

A tear will be shed in the best of times,
A laugh will ring in the worst.
Justice will come to the evil one,
But compassion shall come to him first.

Gone the time we used to smile
Gone the love we used to share
My heart bleeding for you
But you dont even care
Needle through my heart
I fell on my knees
You kicked me and went away.

Bloodshot eyes that ends passion play
Crumbling haunted silence over whelming
Twisted source of self-destruction
Planted these seeds of hate
Now I wonder if I’ll smile in my coffin
It become my poison apple for mingled
blood
Life becomes too much for me to bear



Via http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/dark...

And As the earth rumbled and the clouds
did part
The sky tuned red and the world went dark
The goodness did vanish and demons
awoke
Amongst the cold silence, within the black
smoke


Via http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/dark...

Do you want to do something?
Something, anything, new maybe
Feel the wind in your face
Hear the sounds of grace
See the sights far away
Clear your mind forget all dismay
If so, then please follow me
We can be free
Spread our wings
Sour over the deep blue canopy,
Or is it supposed to be sea,
You, me, we can be anything, everything
Childish wonders may appear
Do not fear
Breath it,
Taste it,
Talk it,
Dream it,
Scream it to the world
Do not disagree, look up you shall see
It will be amazing
Facing every excitement
Adrenalen rushing,
No stopping, no hushing
Birds, bees, a couple of fleas
Here, there, everywhere
A dinosour in the air,
Brushing his hair
Reach the end of a rainbow,
learn how to let go,
meet a talking muffin or two
Catch the flew,
And yes people say that I am crazy
For thinking about a man eating daisy,
Come on sing a song,
Play ping pong,
Dance a jig,
Wear a wig,
Touch a cherry tree
We can be so much more than the eye can see

Lol!

Thats good.

my little mrs.crazy can finally write poems!i 'm so happy1:)

Lol! Not really. ;)

Yes Really

As I sit here crying
In this damp dark corner,
Of dispare
Thinking about all the lies,
you whispered in my ear
The fear
in my heart
You tore me apart
Chewed me up
Spit me out like a stale poptart
Burned me whole
Set me ablaze
thick haze
Everything you stole
Long nights you held me,
sipping tea
I couldn't see,
the monster you would turn to be
Broke me in half,
You laughed
A smile,
sweet as a cupcake
How could it have been fake
Destroyed me
Blinded my sight,
till I couldn't fight
Thouht I would wear white,
for you
Walk down the isle
Bridemaids in a perfect file
I was in denile
Started showing your true colors
Fingernails you bour into me
Said you adore me
But obviously,
never felt bad
Just wanted to make me sad
A lad in a candy shop,
poked and prodded me,
till I would pop
blew a fuze,
I lose,
Was your muse
now I cry,
wonder why
Should have bid goodbye
But couldn't fly,
Tight around you neck,
like a tie
Said you love me,
And sat above me
The whole time
It was a crime
A shame
You had all the fame
a idol
Now I'm suicidel
Try, try, try
Wanna die
Made me believe in a lie
Wasn't real
won't ever be able to feel,
never again
so much pain
ill just sit out in the rain
Catch a cold
Hachoo!
Boo you
Overdose,
So close
ill haunt your soul
that's the toll,
you'll pay for screwing me over
No luck,
Better find a four leaf clover
Dead and cold
Hope my story gets to be told

O-^

Wow

No good...?

SUPER GOOD

XD thank!

Keep it Up

K. But I don't wright poems. Like ever.

Why

Its great.