Writing 4 eva discussion

I think that members in this group should go out and read someone elses writing and comment on it. So go and read it, vote if u like it. Then if u really like it come and talk about it here.:)

Please Read My Story

Here it is:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Tell me if you like it or not

i loooooved it!!!!

I need someone to read one of the stories I'm working on...here's the link:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

comments/advice/etc. wanted, needed, and appreciated!

hi Plz read my writings!
i dream to become an author one day and really would appreciate it if u would read wat i write
:)
here it is:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...

hope u guys like it!!
;)

Dominique wrote: "I need someone to read one of the stories I'm working on...here's the link:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

comments/advice/etc. wanted, needed, and appreciated!"

i read the first 2 chapters
i like it
its unique
nice idea!
:)
keep it up

D.C. wrote: "Please Read My Story

Here it is:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Tell me if you like it or not"

i liked it!
u should continue writing!
:)
:)

*Ca$ Ca$* wrote: "me, read any of them i know that they my not be the greatest but..."

nice beginning i like it wen u said: "ran down a narrow alley; big enough for her, but too small for a human being; let alone a car." i think u should add more feelings. Like Nikki's fear or something and her emotions. also some more description but over all i like it its nice and original :>