Reading in English Group 5 Term 1 2015 discussion

You should post your second short story here. You should also follow the same structure as your first story.

My father has instituted a company for 25 years and now my parents are building up their company and it has many achievements. When I lived with my parents, they taught me many experience of business. For example, when I communicate with my customers that I can improve my communication skills and I can meet many people that I haven't met before.My parents also taught me how to assess and trust a stranger, so on. I think my parent's business is interesting and I really like it so I want to continue my parents's business. I will be a CEO of our company in the future.

There were a dog and a cat who lived in same house. The dog was bigger than the cat.The dog would to be friend with a cat. The cat looks down on a dog, but the dog didn't give up. The dog was always following the cat. One day, the cat was on a shelf, but the cat missed its footing in footing. At that time the dog perceived danger of the cat. So the dog moved for help the cat.The cat was saved thanks to the dog.So the cat thought better of the dog.The dog and the cat got closer a little.

There was the girl who said Teddy. The girl was 6 years old. The girl was the same as her name and loved a teddy bear. she took good care of the teddy bear which had her mother present.
One day, suddenly, the teddy bear began to move. The teddy bear said to her. "I grant one dream that I was gentle, and always thank you for me, and you liked for thanks." The girl asked "Please make me a princess!" The teddy bear took her to the dreamland with it and made her princess. Therefore she met a prince and spent happy time.
In a few minutes, teddy woke up. It was a dream. But she wore a pretty dress. Would it be really a dream as expected?

Long time ago,ther was a pretty girl.She is very cute but lie a lot. She always lied.When her mother said 'Are you finish your homework?' she said 'yes.'But it was lie. She wnent to the school and her teacher angry her.Becaue she always didn't do her homework.The ather she lie.Her friends invent watch the movie,she said go together but she didn't go.So she doesn't have many friends.Suddenly the boy come to the school.And he said her 'Are you okay?'She noticed I'm a liar.She stopped lying.And she become good girl.

The boy was in love with the girl.The girl had long hair and she was very beautiful.He talk to her.After a while he became friend with her.But, he couldn’t touch her.Because she didn’t have body.So she was ghost.He couldn’t hide his surprise.But, he didn’t have to worry about what people say, since he didn’t change his mind that he love her.So she was drawn to his personality.As a result, she was in love with him too.A while,they pledged eternal love.And they lived happily.

Once upon a time one woodcutter was cutting the wood. But then he slipped from my hand fell a nearby pond. He was in trouble. Then a woman appeared from pond.
She asked him which did you drop into pond a gold hatchet or a silver hatchet? He answered I dropped neither one. She said you are honest person so I will give you both of them.
His friend heard about that story by him. He went there and drop his hatchet in pond on purpose. Then a woman appeared. She asked which did you drop into pond a gold hatchet or a silver hatchet? He answered I dropped a gold hatchet. And then she was disappointed .She said you are stupid. She left without any of gift. He lost his hatchet.

Once upon a time, John lived in a village. He was a fisherman.
One day, he encountered children who were being mean to the turtle.
He helped the turtle from children. This night he heard knock the door when he was sleeping. He open the door and then the turtle was there front of the door. The turtle said thank you for help me from children so I want to thank you so I want to show you around my home town. Get on my back! And the he went to there. There were a big castle and then he had a party, he had a good meals and he really enjoyed. At last he got present which was big box from turtle. The turtle said to him never ever open this box please. But there were only strangers who he doesn’t know when he came back to his home town. And then he opened that box which the turtle gave him. And then he became an old man. he felt like that he spend only few days in the turtle’s home town but that was so long in real life.

There were fish in the sea. Perhaps they lived happily there. One day, fishermen suddenly tried to catch them for their delicious food. Therefore, these fish resisted these wicked guys because they have lots of friends and family. They absolutely wanted to live more and more. "Run away! Don't eat fake food with fish hook! if you eat it, you'll be caught by them" said the most clever fish. However one of them who was dying because of hunger was unfortunately bite the trap. "Haha, I could got a stupid fish!" said the fisherman with smile. I've just eaten tempura with a fish! It was really tasty anyway!!

There is a girl.She is so beautiful.But,she has a not kind mother and two sisters.They let her everything.One day,It was held the party at the castle.She really want to go there,but they don't let her go.She was sad.Suddenly,a witch appeared and say"I let you go to the party!"And she makes a beautiful dress,a grass heel.The witch makes her more beautiful than before.And the witch say "come back here until 0 o'clock.The magic will disappear the time."She said,"Ok.Thank you so much."And she goes to the party.There is a handsam prince.The prince falls in love at first sight to her.And she too.They enjoyed dancing so she forgot the witch said.She recall it,and run to her home.She lost her heel then.After that,the prince really want to see her,so he looks for her harder.The not kind people hide a beautiful girl,but the prince find her!They become happy.

There was Badger that was clever and knew anything so he was loved and depended by everyone. But,at the end of autumn, the aged Badger perceived his death. And one night he died while he was dreaming about he runs to as lifted a long tunnel. "I'll go beyond the long tunnel. Good bye from Badger"...leaving the letter. His friends who was left to lose irreplaceable friend were full of sorrow. Everyone didn't know how should they do. When spring came and they could go outside, they became to talking about friendly his memories that taught them a lot of things together.

There was a 5-year-old girl. Her name was Mii-chan. One day,Mii-chan was asked the errand from mom. "I want milk for baby but I'm busy now. Can you go to buy alone?" she said. Mii-chan jumped up in surprise because she never went out until now. But Mii-chan said "Of course!" and received it. Mii-chan headed to the store what was the top of a slope. Her heart was beating so fast that she would fall down on the slope. At the store, "Give me milk!"Mii-chan shouted at the top of her voice but she won't get an answer from the owner yet. Finally Mii-chan could buy milk so she gave a sigh of relief. And tears run down her cheeks. On her way home,down the slope,mom was waving her hand to Mii-chan while mom held a baby.

Hina her story is grate fantasy. Love between a human and a ghost is very novelty and interesting. So I like the story:):)

part 2
Her mother want to find answer that why her daughter kill herself. And she cann't believe that her daughter kill herself.because her daughter is very kind and friendly. she want to know reason about her daughter.She went to meet someone about ghost.She believe that because of ghost.Something happened to her daughter and they said that because of ghost that car parking but they have to go that place first.Because they want to talk with ghost what the ghost want from her daughter?? why the ghost kill her daughter?? . Instandly they talk with the ghost and ghost want to kill them too. Suddenly she sees her daughter call her for some help. she knew her daughter is gone but she cries and run to her daughter.And she don't see the floor. Her daugther run away from her.So she have to run faster.Suddenly her daughter stop and said " i love you mommy ".She runs to her daughter but there no floor anymore so she falls down from fifth floor!!!!! before that she said " i love you too my dear " and smiles.Finally she died same as her daughter. but fifth floor car parking still open!!!