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Jun 05, 2015 07:48AM
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Duchess Natalia of the Northern Lights in the sky
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It all started 15 years ago when 5 girls,princesses were born. Each one with a certain gift. The eldest Emilee was born with the gift of love. The second oldest Maya was born with the gift of joy.Maybell was born with the gift of anger. Joy was born with the gift of life and the youngest Rosemay was born with the gift of death. All the gifts were loved and happy except Rosemay's gift. Everyone feared her gift for she could kill anyone one she touch if she wanted them dead. The family tried to get a different gift but everyone in the kingdom was born with a gift. However Rosemay's gift was the first gift to be bad and could endanger people. With the protection of the Kingdom in Mind. They sent Rosemay to a place where she could always be happy but instead, she got angry with her parents she ran away before she could be taken away. She started a rebellion, but that was 15 years ago, now the 5th princess became a myth to the kingdom but only the royal family knew that the myth was true.After she ran away the kingdom changed and King Jerad divided the kingdom to 5 sections,Joy, war, love,life and at the center was the Royal where only the king and queen lived. Now all the princesses were in the throne room and waited for the Kind Jerad and Queen Rose to arrive with what princess would rule what kingdom.
That sounds really cool! (BTW, changed the name of the thread for you. :) )
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Hing Jerad and Queen Rose walked into to the throne room "Welcome ladies it is a very special day for you guys." Queen rose said. "Indeed it is a big day. Now girls in 2 weeks it will be your 16th birthday and when that happens each of you will rule a kingdom. Which kingdom I can not say but you can." King Jerad said. "What do you mean father? How can we choose what kingdome we have?" Emilee asked.
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(This is an interesting story. I'd love to read more but could you work on your formatting and punctuation? It will make it much easier for us, the readers. The less struggle to read through it, the more we can enjoy the story itself.)
