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message 1: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
:)


message 2: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments :D


message 3: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
Have you got any ideas?


message 4: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Like what?


message 5: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
The plot


message 6: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Well I would love it if there is a love triangle in it


message 7: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
Okay, lets start with making characters then.


message 8: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Ok so there is ofcourse the protogonist, she should be a girl right?


message 9: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
Yes.
Here's a character form:

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Appearance:
Family:
Relationship status:


message 10: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Name : how about Samie

Gender: Female of course

Age: B/n 20 and 22 ur choice

Appearance: A black hair, Blue eyed

Relationship status: Single


message 11: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
Name: Landon
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Appearance: green eyes, blonde hair, tall
Relationship status: single


message 12: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Name : Dominic
Gender: male
Age: 22
Appearance: A black hair, brown eyed
Relationship status: Single


message 13: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
Name: Alexandra
Age: 21
Gender: female
Appearance: hazelnut-eyes, brown hair (shoulder length), petite
Relationship status: single

Should we make more characters?


message 14: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments No I think that's pretty enough


message 15: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments So what's next?


message 16: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
Samie is the main character that goes back in time. Which time does she go to?
And which time does she come from?


message 17: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Well she comes from 2013

and she goes back to IDK the Medival age


message 18: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
Okay, and where should it take place? Europe?


message 19: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Yap


message 20: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
Okay, so we should find like this very cool setting. Uhmn… Finland? Russia?


message 21: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Russia all the way


message 22: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
Yay!! So Samie is Russian. She goes back in time: medieval era
What happened in Russia during that era?


message 23: by Fiker (last edited Feb 11, 2013 11:58AM) (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Well practically nothing Russia was a very small and disorganised country or Kingdom, but its the perfect setting for our story since it was a tight community


message 24: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
Yes! Okay, and are we going to say some stuff about her normal or just about being back in the past?


message 25: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments IDK you choose


message 26: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
How about she just randomly wakes up in the middle of a fuel one morning and think its a dream?


message 27: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Good one so is the story going to be in a first person or third person narration


message 28: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
That's such a difficult! Uhmn…


message 29: by Fiker (last edited Feb 11, 2013 07:45PM) (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments IT can be in a first person narration and if we make her witty and Sarcastic that would be a plus


message 30: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
I agree


message 31: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments So...


message 32: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
First person


message 33: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Ya I get that but I meant the "so..." as what are we going to do next?


message 34: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
I'm so sorry but it's 12.21 am; tomorrow?


message 35: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Wow sry how inconsiderate of me I am in a diff time zone being in Ethiopia and all so yes tomorow


message 36: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
Okay, here's a summary of what we have till now:

Setting: Russia, Medieval Era
Main character: Samie
Characters: 4
Plot: Samie wakes up one morning and finds herself in an open field. She thinks it's a dream and decides to go explore her surroundings..........
Perspective: Samie


What is she going to explore? like a city/country


message 37: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments A city


message 38: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
So she wakes up on a farm or just an open plane?


message 39: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments How about around a palace


message 40: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
She wakes up in the garden of the castle. How about that?


message 41: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Nice:)


message 42: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
So we have two guys and a girl. There where tsaars in Russia so maybe the girl is the tsaar's daughter or one of the boys is his son.


message 43: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Ya one of the boys can be the firt son of the Czar


message 44: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
Good. Should we start writing?


message 45: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Yap


message 46: by Shav (last edited Feb 13, 2013 05:02AM) (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
One
Russia, present day

Today was horrible! We had a history test, which I knew nothing of, and got an F!
I obviously didn't take that well and freaked out in class.
I can hear whispers in the hallway when I walk by, I'm the new topic of the gossip world.
I did hear the words though: freak, psycho, pills, Sam.
I hate them! I hate everyone!
Maybe I shouldn't have existed in this time at all! Maybe I was born in the wrong age? Well, I wish.
I should live in a time when there wasn't school and girls would be milking cows or something like that. It all seems better than being here though.

Our house is old, so I like to think I live in the time of the first world war. Grandma said that the house was built before it, but I don't believe her.
When I'm lying in my bed, I always look at the ceiling. It looks really old! Maybe the house will fall apart someday, I want to be here when that happens. And that's when my eyes close and I fall asleep, and dream deeply.

I'm walking in a building. It's very clean, it could be the presidential building maybe. There's a woman standing next to me, holding a gun. I can feel the tension around us, she tells me to walk right behind her after she shoots. A man emerges from a closed and she shoots, two times. I quickly follow her and he comes right behind us. He jumps forward and grabs my ankle and then-. I'm standing in the building again and the woman is next to me, I take in her profile: She has bright red hair and kind face. She's wearing a tight suit, it looks like a catwoman suit. She starts to speak telling me to be right behind her. The man emerges again and she shoots and starts to walk away. I stand there immobile. He starts to walk and I see an open door and quickly get inside, when I close it I can just make out the shock on the woman's face. I shut the door behind me, there's no lock and I quietly hope that the man hasn't followed me. There are two doors in this little room and either have a doorknob. The man comes in and he shoots me, three times. I pretend to be dead, but it feels like he shot me so I'll have a long death. He takes a bat in his hand and starts hitting me with it.


message 47: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments He repeatedly hit me and i cried for help or at least tried to but no voice came out of my mouth. It was then I realized that I was about to die and there was no one coming to save me, and then in a split of seconds everything around me became a blur and I felt like I was being absorbed into another world, if what I felt before was pain this was hell; I felt my bones being crushed, my heart beating so fast that I was sure it would rip out of my body there and then. At last I felt my body touch the ground


message 48: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments It was soft, the ground and everything around me smelt good, even better than our Garden- which should be a big milestone since my grandmother and mom filled the place with most wonderful smelling herbs and fruits out there


message 49: by Shav (new)

Shav (keelahlove) | 1004 comments Mod
It was strange to find myself in the garden- my garden. But it didn't really look like my garden. It was different, not the same. And why was I sleeping in the garden? A bird had start to sing, I can barely make out its shape. It's sitting in a nest. The first rays of light have started to tear through the sky. It's beautiful. it feels like I'm in a dream. But hadn't I just had a nightmare? I stand up and there's a white bench in the garden and a fountain. I've never seen it before, maybe I've gone lucid. I sit down on the bench, which is decorated with soft cushions. I yawn and close my eyes. Not to sleep though. I wouldn't want to encounter that strange man again. Someone walks into the garden, a man probably middle-aged. He avoids me and walks on.


message 50: by Fiker (new)

Fiker Haile (habeshabookaddict) | 37 comments Before he walked off though I had seen his face and it looked exactly like my Bestfriend,Dominic, and I wondered if I was getting punked but before I gathered my thoughts two men who wore the same kind of uniform came into the garden and cuffed me with a robe that looked too elgant to be used as handcuff

"Wait! What are you doing?who are you?" I cried

"donot take to us witch!" they answered angrily


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