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message 1: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Invariably, the function of my conception served
solely so that my end may be met young, and in conflict.

My yearning is to meet my death at swords end, in a fist-fight,
on the bucking horse, in the inferno. Void gentleness,
or the soft woes of sleep.

Words do so little to put paint to a face. He would like to go out in a burning fuselage,
kissing the atmosphere, scattered out on all the continents, ash and bone-dust.

It was he who told me the nature of astronomical systems--
an astronomical unit is the distance from the earth to the sun
a light year is the span it takes light to travel in a single year
then there are parsecs, kiloparsecs, megaparsecs.

a single parsec is 3.2616 light-years.


at what intervals does one breathe?

it is nothing to measure the distance of continents, the space
between heartbeats and yet is there anything more vast
than words unspoken? we are all apart.



message 2: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Ugh how do you do it? Amazing, as always. :)


message 4: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
... First, you sacrifice a unicorn. Second, you use the souls of innocent maidens to fuel your writing fire. Third, you use vague analogies like astronomical measurements to talk about life. Just follow that checklist and you should be golden, Sam.


message 5: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
JUST KIDDING. Thank you guys <3


message 6: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Alright, time to go unicorn hunting.


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments Kriss wrote: "... First, you sacrifice a unicorn. Second, you use the souls of innocent maidens to fuel your writing fire. Third, you use vague analogies like astronomical measurements to talk about life. Just f..."

Oh. As long as that's all.


message 8: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments @ Kriss: Do you not have a brooding interval at all? I do it between steps 2 and 3.


message 9: by Allison (new)

Allison | 679 comments Oh! I have a friend and we all say he's a unicorn because he styles his hair like a unicorn horn, does that count??

JK. I would never sacrifice my best unicorn friend.


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