Reading in English Group 5 Term 1 2015 discussion

This is where you should post your third or fourth stories. I want you to send it to me first and I will check it and tell you to make some corrections. Then you can post it here.

It was a great trip for 2 days when I went to Wellington with my 8 friends.
On the first day, we went around Cuba street to buy some interesting things and then we picked a coffee shop on Cuba street for viewing and then we got dinner in the Vietnamese restaurant, it was really delicious. When we were full, we took a break.
The second day, we went to Tepapa Museum, it was the most interesting museum that I haven’t ever looked at before, it’s very big and it had many fossils, rocks and so on. I also saw the big squid and some thing about New Zealand, Maori’s culture. After 4 hours in Tepapa. We all came back to IPC with happy minds. I think it’s a great trip for students from other countries to research about New Zealand and different cultures.

One day, there was a little frog. He wasnt very strong and he wasnt very fast, although he thought he was the best in the swamp. ”Look at me! I can fly!” as he jumped 2cm. The whole swamp laughed. He was an arrogant little fck. The end

One day , The little girl name is Lena. She is very pretty. And she goes shopping with her friend at shopping mall. They have dinner at food court.And her friend has a boyfriend suddenly her boyfriend's calling to her friend.Her friend says " she have to go now. Can you go back alone??".Lena says "yes,i can go back alone. Don't worry about me.". After that her friend left already and she want to go back.She walks at the footpath. Suddenly someone collide with her and she almost fall on the road.But the man helps her by pull her hand.And he says be careful pretty girl.Suddenly hand's someone cover her face and she falls on the ground.When she wakes up!!! she bind with the chair and her hand and feet too.She screams !!!!! no one answer her. But the man that help her come inside the room and smile.He holds the knife and stab her stomatch.She screams and a lot of blood on the ground.She asks him "why do you want to kill me ?? i don't know you ??" but he replys that " because you are pretty girl" and laugh!!!!.He kills the little girl and no one didn't see the little girl again.Also her corpse.she dissappear forever.!!!

It was the family who a family was very close, and was serious. One day mother has fallen down suddenly. Father heard a diagnosis result in place of mother. And I said to the daughter who minded the result in this way. "Mother suffered a disease without being cured". Therefore, until time when she dies, We will tell a lie. I said, the daughter "understood it" sadly. The daughter said to father a few days later. "It is hard that I tell a lie". Therefore I want to talk about the truth now. And I want to always laugh in front of mother until mother dies. Father agreed. Two people told all to mother on the next day. Mother laughed. And I said in this way. "Oneself understands oneself most". I know that I told a lie because I watched your trouble so far to miss it. After all mother is a very great person.