Writers Café discussion

Nope, sry. But I'm writing my own story, and I need some people to look at it. It's my first book I've ever written, so, I don't know how it will turn out...

You could try some of these places. I am working through the list myself but there are a lot of writers groups which may be of use to you.

Writetobreathe
Scribd.com 
Writers.net
Writing.com
Writngroom.com
Bookmatchers.com
Writerscafe.org
Shelfari.com
Wattpad.com
Authonomy.com

You could also try things like livejournal and post your work there too.

I don't know of any specific magazines but you could try looking for other bloggers similar to you, see if you can't share some free advertising for each other.

Hope this helps. I'll scratch my head and see if I can think of anything else.

Lynzie