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Ahem. Hi guys I am birdlover613. As Alex said, this was my idea, so I'd like to explain it. In chapter rping, you get together with as many other people as you want, but be careful, cause it'll be hard for other to join. Now after that, you start off with your charrie on the boat. You write a chapter, doesn't matter how long really, but the longer the better I think. Then the person doing it with you, writes another chapter. So on and so forth. I think it would be best to have the story take place on the boat, cause we are doing it in this group. If you have any questions ask me! I know it is confusing, so those who get great. Those who don't, wait until I start one, and see!
So? I really need the captains daughter and a boy. Know anybody?
Shruti wrote: "whta r charries already rping in a other spot?"
I don't think it matters.
I don't think it matters.
I am just going to put a piece of advice out here. I would suggest to type it up someplace else if easier and just copy and paste.
Here goes nothing.
I heard the boys before I actually saw them. They were talking normally, but from where I was standing in the eagles nest, I heard every awful word they said.
“Will, my friend. How are you?”
I recognized the voice. It was henry. He was a scrawny little boy with little legs and arms but a big mouth. He loved to talk and gossip.
“Fine. How are you faring?”
“Quite well. If I may ask, do you know of the beautiful girl that is up there in the nest?”
I stiffened.
“No I can’t say I do.”
I turned ever so slightly to get a glimpse of the newcomer. He was standing beside Henry tying knots in the rope ladder. The new boy called Will was obviously not from where we came from. His light eyes and dark hair put him out of place near all of the light haired ones here. Like me.
“Have you heard of her history? No?! Well, you are in for a treat. Her father was a noble British. He had a fair estate and women at his beck and call. But he turned down every lady that came by. Rumors were that he bed them and then let them go. Well, anyway, one day he was at merchants fair and saw a gypsy. Yes, yes, I know. Amazing. He fell for her. However, he actually had the nerve to call her his soon to be wife. The man’s father was furious. He threw him out and told him that none of the family’s fortune would go to him. But the man didn’t care. He ran off with the gypsy and within a year they had that gorgeous little thing. The father decided to become a sailor after the gypsy passed away, but it was barely a year before he also died. So the captain took the gypsy bitch in and raised her with his own child. Now she works for him.”
I trembled in rage. Only half of that story was true. But Henry wasn’t done.
“All the other boys are after her. Just like her father after her mother. It really is a shame. She is such a dame. And I hear she has the eyes of an eagle. She could spot an island thousands of miles away.”
This was too much.
“She also has ears like a cat.” I say loud enough for them to hear me. Both boys whirl around to stare at me. I was sitting up on the edge of the nest, one leg hanging over and the other drawn up to my chest. I deliberately did not look at them. Then Henry had the nerve to laugh.
“You think you are so full of talent, don't you? Well I don't believe it. You’re known for your ability to look as if you have no bones and can flip in the air as easily as I can walk. So why don’t you show us?” he taunted. I bit my lip. I desperately wanted to show this thug what I really can do, but I would get in trouble. No fighting on deck. The new guy Will was staring intently at me, curious like a kitten. I sighed. Why not?
Henry whooped as I balanced on the edge of the nest. Then I launched myself into the air, grabbed a hanging rope and swung. Then I summersaulted in the air and landed on the other side of the deck. I heard the boys running after me, but I was quicker. I ran to the deck rooms and hid. Once alone, it was hard not to keep the tears from coming.
Okay. I need a person to be will. Any takers?
Oh and for those all picky about the language, think of the way it is used.
I heard the boys before I actually saw them. They were talking normally, but from where I was standing in the eagles nest, I heard every awful word they said.
“Will, my friend. How are you?”
I recognized the voice. It was henry. He was a scrawny little boy with little legs and arms but a big mouth. He loved to talk and gossip.
“Fine. How are you faring?”
“Quite well. If I may ask, do you know of the beautiful girl that is up there in the nest?”
I stiffened.
“No I can’t say I do.”
I turned ever so slightly to get a glimpse of the newcomer. He was standing beside Henry tying knots in the rope ladder. The new boy called Will was obviously not from where we came from. His light eyes and dark hair put him out of place near all of the light haired ones here. Like me.
“Have you heard of her history? No?! Well, you are in for a treat. Her father was a noble British. He had a fair estate and women at his beck and call. But he turned down every lady that came by. Rumors were that he bed them and then let them go. Well, anyway, one day he was at merchants fair and saw a gypsy. Yes, yes, I know. Amazing. He fell for her. However, he actually had the nerve to call her his soon to be wife. The man’s father was furious. He threw him out and told him that none of the family’s fortune would go to him. But the man didn’t care. He ran off with the gypsy and within a year they had that gorgeous little thing. The father decided to become a sailor after the gypsy passed away, but it was barely a year before he also died. So the captain took the gypsy bitch in and raised her with his own child. Now she works for him.”
I trembled in rage. Only half of that story was true. But Henry wasn’t done.
“All the other boys are after her. Just like her father after her mother. It really is a shame. She is such a dame. And I hear she has the eyes of an eagle. She could spot an island thousands of miles away.”
This was too much.
“She also has ears like a cat.” I say loud enough for them to hear me. Both boys whirl around to stare at me. I was sitting up on the edge of the nest, one leg hanging over and the other drawn up to my chest. I deliberately did not look at them. Then Henry had the nerve to laugh.
“You think you are so full of talent, don't you? Well I don't believe it. You’re known for your ability to look as if you have no bones and can flip in the air as easily as I can walk. So why don’t you show us?” he taunted. I bit my lip. I desperately wanted to show this thug what I really can do, but I would get in trouble. No fighting on deck. The new guy Will was staring intently at me, curious like a kitten. I sighed. Why not?
Henry whooped as I balanced on the edge of the nest. Then I launched myself into the air, grabbed a hanging rope and swung. Then I summersaulted in the air and landed on the other side of the deck. I heard the boys running after me, but I was quicker. I ran to the deck rooms and hid. Once alone, it was hard not to keep the tears from coming.
Okay. I need a person to be will. Any takers?
Oh and for those all picky about the language, think of the way it is used.
Mod
THANK YOU. YOU are the first to like it other than Alex.
Mimi heard the footsteps of people running on the deck and saw a girl land on the other side of the deck. She kept watching until the girl disappeared.Mimi was a new student on the crew, learning about life on the sea. She is very stubborn, and very mysterious. She has a thirst for rebellion and the wild side. She can be very kind and caring at times, but spends most of her times being sarcastic and pessimistic. She is clever and athletically talented. She can get very lonely most times, and, even if she doesn't know it yet, she is trying to find a true friend, and a special someone that shares her rebellious and wild side.
Mimi walked to the other side of the deck to see the beautiful ocean that she fell in love with. She suddenly felt the urge to break the rules, and "accidentally" take a swim in the cool ocean.
"Hmmmm... It is pretty hot out here... A little swim wouldn't hurt..." She made sure the coast was clear, and jumped overboard. Little did she know that another boy was watching her. He liked her rebellious side, and decided to "save"her (More like join her).
Who could this mysterious boy be??
(Anyone wanna play him?? Come on guys! Don't be shy!! I promise you won't die of my ugliness!!)
Here is Will's side of the story.
WILL.
I watch her go. Sadly. I saw the hurt clearly on her face as she jumped. I turned and hid behind the door, waiting. I hear a sob and cringe. I knew that Henry was up to no good, but I listened anyways. How could I make it up to her? I didn’t even know her name. With a sigh, I go and to find Captain Steven and tell him about the rope ladder. Heading toward his cabin, I knock on the door. His daughter answers. I stare at her. She is breathtaking. Her luscious wavy caramel hair seems to float on her shoulders and her large deep gray eyes peer up at me. She looks surprised. Her delicate mouth forms into a smile and I see her dimple clearly.
“May I help you?” she asks ever so politely. I clear my throat.
“Is Captain Steven there? I need to speak to him.” She nods her heads, and opens the door wider and invites me in.
“Father, um the merchant boy is here for you,” she calls out to a closed door.
I hear Steven call out, “Send him in.” I knock twice and open the door. Steven looks up. “Will! What a pleasant surprise.”
“Sir, I am here to inform you that the rope ladder will need an extension and that the windows of the lower deck cabins also need to be repaired. The glass is rusting and will soon leak.” I try a little salute thing. Steven drags a hand across his face and furrows his brow.
“That will be taken care of. Will, do you know of the Moonlit Sea Festival?”
I shake my head, bewildered. It sounded like a ceremony that happened in novel.
“Well it is tomorrow night. And this time, our decorator decided to stay behind. Can I ask you to take care of it? Elizabeth, my daughter, whom I presume you have met, can assist you. She has great taste in the colors. Po will also be helping.”
I nod, but inside, I groan. I hate decorating. I have no idea who Po is but if he is anything like the rest of the crew, I’m going to blow. But I made a mistake. And now I am going to pay for it. I nod to Steven again. He dismisses me with the wave of his hand. As I leave, Elizabeth gives me a small smile. I try not to run out the door.
WILL.
I watch her go. Sadly. I saw the hurt clearly on her face as she jumped. I turned and hid behind the door, waiting. I hear a sob and cringe. I knew that Henry was up to no good, but I listened anyways. How could I make it up to her? I didn’t even know her name. With a sigh, I go and to find Captain Steven and tell him about the rope ladder. Heading toward his cabin, I knock on the door. His daughter answers. I stare at her. She is breathtaking. Her luscious wavy caramel hair seems to float on her shoulders and her large deep gray eyes peer up at me. She looks surprised. Her delicate mouth forms into a smile and I see her dimple clearly.
“May I help you?” she asks ever so politely. I clear my throat.
“Is Captain Steven there? I need to speak to him.” She nods her heads, and opens the door wider and invites me in.
“Father, um the merchant boy is here for you,” she calls out to a closed door.
I hear Steven call out, “Send him in.” I knock twice and open the door. Steven looks up. “Will! What a pleasant surprise.”
“Sir, I am here to inform you that the rope ladder will need an extension and that the windows of the lower deck cabins also need to be repaired. The glass is rusting and will soon leak.” I try a little salute thing. Steven drags a hand across his face and furrows his brow.
“That will be taken care of. Will, do you know of the Moonlit Sea Festival?”
I shake my head, bewildered. It sounded like a ceremony that happened in novel.
“Well it is tomorrow night. And this time, our decorator decided to stay behind. Can I ask you to take care of it? Elizabeth, my daughter, whom I presume you have met, can assist you. She has great taste in the colors. Po will also be helping.”
I nod, but inside, I groan. I hate decorating. I have no idea who Po is but if he is anything like the rest of the crew, I’m going to blow. But I made a mistake. And now I am going to pay for it. I nod to Steven again. He dismisses me with the wave of his hand. As I leave, Elizabeth gives me a small smile. I try not to run out the door.
Mimi came up for a breath from underneath the water. The cool, refreshing water dripped from her face. "Ahhhh.... A refreshing swim," she said.
Splash!
"Woah! What was that??!!" She yelled.
She looked all around, and saw a shadow rising to the surface. And then, a boy her age, appeared from under the water.
"Uhhh... Did you follow me into the water, or just fall over board?" Mimi asked the strange boy.
"I stalked you here. It's really hot, and I hate hot weather, so I decided to follow a strange, yet very clever girl into the water because it was such a rebellious way to get refreshed," he answered.
"Well, anyways, after that odd story, you never have me a name to put on the face of my stalker," Mimi said.
"The name's Zavier. You can call me "Z" because you are now staring at you're new best guy friend/stalker.""Yeah, "Z" isn't really working out for you. I'll just call you Zavier. So, I sense that you're trying to get away from the world too, huh." Mimi answered.
"Yeah, I was out on my balcony, yes I can't stay inside forever so I asked for a balcony, and flashbacks from my past flooded my mind, so I came to blow off some steam out on the deck, and saw you break the rules. I decided that if a strange girl could break the rules and have fun, so can I."
"Same story here. I think we will have an... intresting, friendship."
"Hey! You kids!! What're you doing off of the boat???!!" One of the crew members shouted.
"Have a good excuse about getting. Us out of detention?" Zavier asked.
"Are you kidding? I am the master at making good excuses!" Mimi said.
"Great. By the way, I never caught your name."
"Mimi."
"No, that name doesn't suit you either. You look more like a "Wild Zafrina" to me. That's it! I'll call you Zafrina! Now we both have awesome, names that start with Z!!"
"You can't change my name!"
"Says who? And with what army??"
Mimi smiled and said, "Me."
To be continued!!
As I walked back to the infirmary I heard soft sobs "hello". I said.
snake wrote: "As I walked back to the infirmary I heard soft sobs "hello". I said."
Sorry to interrupt, but rp is for replying and such. I don't mean to be rude but chapter rp is for longer more detailed rping.
Sorry to interrupt, but rp is for replying and such. I don't mean to be rude but chapter rp is for longer more detailed rping.
((ok how about this)) As I was walking back to the the infirmary I was thinking to myself about a time long gone. I was thinking back when my parents were alive we were watching a play as we exited the play we got to our carriage I heard a loud bang and my. Parents when down like a bag of rocks. Fast forward during the army I was working with a patient and a soldier came running at me and tackled me I heard a explosion behind me and a stinging pain in my left leg I had to walk with a limp the rest of my life so the army sent me home. I worked odd jobs and then found work on this boat. Muffled cries interrupted my thoughts "hello". (( I edited it ))
Better. Good. Just take note its In the sixties so no movies or cars. Sorry! :)
No answer I better go back to the infirmary.
