The Complete Stories and Poems discussion

Please tell me what you think of my poetry!

http://wp.me/1V5cq

CAGED! epic! I really love it woah, you are powerful and fiesty with emotion! I just started a group "Review For You" and it sounds like it may be a good place for you:) check it out
http://www.goodreads.com/group/show/9...

I would love to read more too:) not just trolling for members lol

wow thank you for the feedback i am just happy someone is reading!

Thats very good!! have you tried composing longer poems?

Yes on my Blog there are a couple very long ones :)

I'd say you've got some unique phrasings there, but I'd recommend you strive for more concrete imagery. Give your readers the specifics that make the poem pop.

Jes5ica wrote: "Please tell me what you think of my poetry!

http://wp.me/1V5cq"

Pretty and enjoyable. Would make for some fun songs (I sang them to whatever tune came to mind). If I recommend anything, it would be to enhance your vocabulary and imagery. Let the words flow. Love it!

please read my short story

Ps. I really like your style.

nice :)