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My first novel
Dean MacAllister Dean (last edited Mar 04, 2013 11:10PM ) Mar 01, 2013 04:56PM
Hey guys! I am a new author and my first book has just come out. I wouldn't mind getting a few opinions on my book, some constructive criticism to improve as a writer. I am not sure if I am allowed to discuss this here, if I'm not please tell me and I will take this post down. Always looking to improve my writing and would love some honest opinions. I am an Australian author and part way through writing my second book for publishing. All comments appreciated. Thanks! Dean Macallister



Though I am not an expert on anything, I would be willing to offer a critique if you're interested in my opinion.


I just read this book, because it came recommended from another group I am a part of.
I really enjoyed the story. It had "The Time Travelers Wife" feel to it. I liked that book too BTW. When the other characters were introduced, i was lost for a minute, but quickly recovered. I like the bond the characters had as well.
Keep up the good work


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