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Mila *You Are In The Presence of Amazingness*
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um right here we go.Once upon a time there lived an egg. She was so very beautiful, with golden locks that fell down to her feet, like a cascading waterfall stardust. Her eyes were emeralds, twinkling in the blazing sun. But there was one problem- she was not free range. All of her less beautiful, but free range egg friends laughed at her. As time went on, she grew lonelier and lonelier, until she was about to burst.
Suddenly, her box started to shake, as violently as an earthquake, as though she was being lifted into the air. For seconds she was swung around, bashed and bruised, until eventually, her box opened, and a blinding white light, as bright as the sun, revealed itself to her, as though a treasure chest full of the highest carrot gold had opened,. Now she was really scared. What was this stunning light she saw before her?
One by one her fellow eggs were lifted out of their box, and violently smashed against the side of a glass bowl. But, she wasn't. As beeping noises sounded, large footsteps plodded, and the beautiful, blinding light left, she began to cry. She was all alone. No one was there to help her. So she cried and cried, until there was nothing left in her, and she felt her coat start to tear and break until she stood as a majestic chick ready for flight!
ta daa. Hope you get it, cuz i do but I wrote it. Basically its an egg that hatched. but she was sad cuz she wasnt free range like all the other eggs, even though she was way more beautiful. And because of that the baker didnt want her. And the earthquake was um her getting lifted out of the fridge. yep i think thats it! Oh and the blinding light was her box opening. YAY.
can you wait just like a little bit longer? Sorry, I'm trying to finish my story and it's taking longer than I expected
“Come on, Christie!” I felt my arm being yanked. I groaned and rolled over in bed. “What is it?” I asked sleepily.
“It’s Easter!” Lila said, pulling my arm harder. “I’ll get to see the Easter Bunny today!”
I sat up and rolled my eyes. “Are you sure about that?” I asked sarcastically.
She nodded her head.
‘What the heck,’ I thought. ‘You can humor her.’ I stood up and put on my slippers. “Ok, let’s find the Easter Bunny.” I said.
“Yay!” she started skipping out the bedroom door.
“Hey,” I said.
She turned back and looked at me.
“Shh, we don’t want to wake up Mom and Dad.”
She nodded again and proceeded quietly.
“Ok, so where do you think he is?” I asked her when we got outside. It wasn’t even dawn yet.
“In the woods,” Lila stated, as if it was a fact. She took off running to the forest.
I followed her. After a couple minutes of walking through the underbrush she stopped abruptly and crouched down. I crouched down behind her.
She glanced back at me and I could see the excitement in her eyes. “Look! Look!” she said.
I looked. “What?”
Lila pointed down to the ground. “A footprint!”
I shook my head. “I don’t see anything.”
Lila stood back up and continued walking, gazing at the ground intently.
Before too long she found another ‘footprint.’
Suddenly she let out an excited shout. “I saw him!” She took off running into the underbrush.
“Wait!” I called, trying to follow her.
I lost sight of her. “Lila!” I called, pushing through the briars, tearing my pajamas.
Before long I caught up to her crouching behind a bush. Deciding to play along, I crouched beside her.
For a while we crouched silently before she suddenly tensed. She slowly pointed. “There he is!” she whispered.
“Where?” I asked.
She pointed.
All I saw was a bush.
Lila took off running.
I ran after her, but lost sight of her. “Lila, you’ve gotta stop doing this!” I shouted. I pushed through the underbrush.
When I found her again she was crouched down stroking the air, as if there was an animal there. I watched for a few minutes before coming closer.
Lila looked up to me, her face beaming. “Do you see him?”
“There’s nothing there, Lila.” I said. “Now come on.” I held my hand out.
“Just look,” Lila said. “Look real hard. Please. Just believe me.”
Her eyes looked at me so pleadingly that I looked back to the spot she was stroking.
“Now just believe,” she said.
I mentally rolled my eyes and concentrated hard.
Something shimmered there for a second, but it was gone just as soon.
“You saw him, didn’t you? I know you did!” Lila said excitedly.
I shrugged, not admitting to anything. “Time to go home,” I said.
Lila stood up and walked back to my side.
Seeing her sad look, I said, “I’m sorry.”
She didn’t answer.
I took her hand and we went back to the house.
Mom and Dad were waiting for us. “Where’ve you been?” Mom asked, concerned.
“Looking for the Easter Bunny,” I said.
“Well, did you find him?” A small smile curled at the corners of her mouth.
“Really, Mom,” I said.
“What?” Mom asked. “You never know what you’ll see if you just believe.”
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Cassie 'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood
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Do you want to go ahead and talk about who you want as the winner? IM me about it if you do and I'll try and get ahold of Myia for it to
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