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Rain- By Ruth Erskine

(view spoiler)[Lana stared out the window at the pouring rain. “Is it ever going to stop?” She wondered.
It was then that she saw him. He walked with a steady pace. He did not get wet. The sight of him sent a shiver down Lana’s spine. She left the window quickly and began shoving items into a bag. She had to escape before he came!
She picked up a photograph. For a moment she hesitated, looking at it. They were all so happy, then. There was her little brother, Joseph. He had only been five. And her mother and father. She missed that all so much.
She stuffed the photo in the bag and hurried toward the back door. The whole house shuddered and she was knocked to the floor. He was breaking the door down!
Lana picked herself up and turned the knob of the back door. It was locked! Quickly she fumbled in her pocket for her keys. Without luck, she glanced over at the desk. They were sitting there, just out of her reach.
The house shuddered again. The door wouldn’t hold much longer.
Lana ran over to the desk, grabbed the keys, and ran back to the door. She fumbled for a moment with them and put the key in the keyhole.
The man hit the door again. This time Lana heard wood splintering.
She unlocked the door, and it swung open. She stepped outside and looked up at the sky. The rain fell down on her face.
There! She saw them! Her people had come for her. One of them stretched out her hand. Lana spread her wings and flew upwards. She had escaped! Her fingertips brushed the hand of the other.
It was then that she felt his icy grip around her ankle.
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Wow that is so intense and good. I wish I was that good. Today we write a poem in school:

Runaway by Mila
As I walk along the sandy beech,
The wind blows through my hair.
I've runaway,
I just couldn't stay.
It isn't fair,
They didn't care.
The sand squishes under my feet,
My home is far away.

Trapped, Lost, Alone.
No friends, No life, No more.
The girl who danced in the sun,
dances no more.

Where will I go from here?
Walk forever, to find a happy home.
They neglected what they had,
Disregarded me like a gone fad.
So, I left and never returned,
for who would miss me?
No one!

Maybe I'll stay in this blissful place,
To runaway from the problems I face.

It is kinda bad but I hope it is not bad enough for me to get a bad grade!!

i like it, it's kinda cute

awww thanx! hopefully my teacher thinks so too!

np, fingers crossed :)

lol thx :)

yep :)

so, this is a story or at least part of it, that im working on...tell me what you think.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3... So the story is about a girl that's starting to fall in love with a guy, antill it all goes wrong.

oh um this was the story i did for the easter contest thingy moboby. but i will put it here as well if that is ok xx um yep i dopy

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...