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I need a beter title for my story Elisia Jayne! I just cant think of one!!

Okay, is the story on here (like is it posted on goodreads)?

Yes it is!!! plz read and tell me what u think!!!

Ok!

I did the short stories in the link thread. I was using words as a prompt for both of them. The first one was the word "half", and the second was the word "glitter". I was originally planning to write a story out of both of them. I can't think of how to go about doing that. I would like help with that, please.

um ok, hmm lemme think. Does it deal with the short stories you have just posted, sorry Im a little confused by what you're asking.

Yes. I want to know if they could be turned into actual stories or if they are best left alone as short stories.

well I just read the half one, I think that one is best to be left alone, let me read the glitter one now.

Okay, in my story I have this place called the Palace pf Half-Forgotten Dreams and it's made of people's half-forgotten dreams(really?) The enterance hall's floor is really just a flat piece of transparent glass while an ocean of demented fish swim below it,one room seems to have the night sky for a ceiling,one room is full of clocks,one room is melting . . .you get the idea.
The problem is I need more ideas for different rooms. If you have any ideas could you please tell me?
Here is the link for the chapter: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

hey...
i have written some stories on my page, but idk if they are any good...some people have commented, but i was wondering if anyone here is willing to give me some more constructive critisism
~PEACE~Aly

okay...
i also have a specific story..."Angels"...i want to add more but i dont know which way to take the story...any ideas???
~PEACE~Aly

Aly! I read one of you're story's before you asked us to comment, and it was sooo good! I will definatly read the rest of your stuff!

Hey, Bianca, I think it was you who mentioned what I should call DGC BOOK 2...... was it?

Stealth is Everything is what i suggested

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thats what its called now, I thought it over and realized thay would be great, thanks a million!

Yay! I came up with a good title for yours! Now I just need a good title for mine...

oh which one?

My Love is no longer a realistic-fiction, its now a fantasy/action-adventure, and I need a new title for it. I'm not really working on Pom Pom's See It All anymore...

awww, it was getting really good though! what about the other one? (oh my gosh!!!!!! im soooooooooo sry, im horrible with names and titles! Sometimes I forget what my siblings names are called, i have a horrible memory!) ummm hmm My Love, can you give me the link, I dont think i have read it yet....

I just can't think of what else to write, oh heres the link:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

umm hmmm..... maybe.... eer thats hard.
do you know wat kind of fantasy twist ur going to add?

yes, you know how its about singing? Well, I'm going to make Fiera a siren, I even changed her name to Fiera to make it more exotic (it used to be Elsie). I said I was going to add the fantasy in chapter 4, but I found a better place to stop, so it will come in in chapter 5!

oh k cool!

ok i need a title 4 my story! any suggestions???

which story?

the 1 w/ no title..i posted the link sumwhere on this group

yeah i was reading it, then my computer closed everything, so im looking for the link again

i can post it here if that'll help

no its ok i found it!

kk

I need help! What do you do if your subconscious is yelling at you?

then yell right back at it.
You stole those cookie, Maura!
Well I've had enough of you so you can just shut the heck up and . . .
so you get my drift.

thank you.

Inner consciousness.: but kyle what if to many people see you writing.

Me: why should i care, just shut up and let me write my story in peace

Inner consciousness: your a fool kyle a fool

Me: And you dont exist, so obviously im crazy to, now get out.

LOL! great job for a beginner! :D

Thank You

welcome

You're a theif! A theif I tell you! Let guilt gnaw away at your mind!
I SAID SHUT UP! The cookie were sugar free anyway!
Theif!
Not!
Theif!
NOT! Okay! So just shut up!
**silence**

XD

heh heh, lol

THEIF!

**stranggles subconcious**
ah, peace and quiet . . .

lol, alright well im going to go work on my story!

okidae! see ya!

...lost again...but thanks to those who read my writing

Hi, I'm not sure if my story, Adventures of a Wayward Witch, is too confusing. Um, I know Krista has read it, but I'd love it if some other people let me know if they were really confused. Of course, it all makes perfect sense to ME. LOL

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

it was really good! I loved it and I'll read the rest as soon as I get the chance.

I LOVED THAT PIECE OF WRITING! I KEEP WANTING MORE NOW! I thought about that story all weekend. No lie!