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message 1: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites)


message 2: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) The Woods' Yacht: (view spoiler)


message 3: by Kayla AKA Buttercup (last edited Apr 10, 2013 03:47AM) (new)

Kayla AKA Buttercup  Walters I thought I would be nice and decorate for the Yacht Party!!

 photo party-time-on-a-boat-072311-web-460_zps41a87793.jpg

((If you don't like it, you can delete it lol, I'm cool with that XD))

(view spoiler)


message 4: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) Gage walked around his large yacht that was currently filled with a bunch of random people that he didn't really know. Sure he knew a couple of them from around town, but most of them were strange faces to him. The loud music pounded through his veins as he drank the beer in his hand and leaned against the boat railing.

Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eu-xFv...


message 5: by Antonia (last edited Apr 10, 2013 01:34AM) (new)

Antonia (adf7793) Aly walked on to the yacht and was surrounded by a throng of random strangers. She couldn't see any one she knew and briefly thought about fleeing. Before she could act on her feeling, she was pulled to the dance floor by a guy she didn't know. While she liked the beat, she didn't want to be dancing with this guy. She smiled and tried to walk away but he grabbed her wrist firmly, pulling her back.


message 6: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) Gage looked up from his beer and saw Aly. But what he saw he didn't particularly like. Hayden, his old class mate was pulling her to the dance floor and holding onto her when she tried to leave. Scowling, Gage went over to him, "Hayden! didn't I teach you a long time ago to keep your hands off my things?" For the boys that Gage used to hang with, you had to be possessive about what you considered yours.


message 7: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) Aly had never been so thankful to see someone in her life. Hayden, on the other hand didn't look too happy to see Gage. ...hands off my things? those words surprised Aly, but she kept her face neutral. "Is that so sweetheart, are you his?" Hayden traced her jawline with his fingers, pulling her closer. "Yes I am," Aly replied angrily as she kneed him in the groin. Hayden went down with a hiss and Aly couldn't suppress her smile.


message 8: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) Gage's eyes widened in surprise when she kneed him, "Shit, you may want to ice your boys later." Gage told Hayden before putting his arm around Aly's shoulders and leading her to the bar, "Sorry for my cave man actions back there. You kinda have to do that with Hayden..."


message 9: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) One thing that Aly noticed was that Gage was right, the town had pretty much shut down for his party. Aly smiled at him when he apologized, she didn't mind what he had done at all. In fact, she actually liked his cave man actions. She wondered what he would have done if Hayden wouldn't have let her go. She raised a perfectly arched eyebrow and gave him a flirty smile, "So, I'm yours, am I?"

Her Outfit:(view spoiler)


Kayla AKA Buttercup  Walters ((Hey Kay, do you like the new "decorations" better?))


message 11: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) ((Yeah I do))


message 12: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) "For the Moment being, yes you are." Gage told her, looking down at her.


Kayla AKA Buttercup  Walters ((Awesomeness))


message 14: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) "Hmm, then what shall we do for the moment being, master?" Aly cheekily replied, flashing him a playful smile as she looked up at him.


Kayla AKA Buttercup  Walters ((hey I had a crazy idea for you two! What if Carver and Aly know each other, because Aly's parents saved Carver's parents from a massive lawsuit. And their parents wanted them to date, but they became good friends instead. They haven't seen each other in a few years, so they say hi to each other. Which makes Sailer and Gage jealous at first??))


message 16: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) Rumor walked down the dock towards the Massive Yacht. At least a hundred and fifty people party on the boat and the dock surrounding it. She silently wondered how she was going to find sebastian in the hectic mess.

She wore: (view spoiler)


message 17: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) Sebastian was already at the party, he had been for about 20 minutes, luckily no one had recognized him yet. He glance around for Rumor, with no luck at finding her. He decided to walk around, maybe it would make it easier to find her.


message 18: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) Rumor stepped up onto the boat and started to walk around the edge by the railings looking for her date. A couple of guys noticed her and started trying to her her to come get some drinks with them but she refused. She was growing angry when one of the guys came back and asked her again. Her unique eyes glared at him as she told him no once again. He was really intoxicated and just didn't understand the word NO.


message 19: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) "I believe the lady said no, you should honor her impeccable taste and leave her alone." Sebastian came up behind her and wrap his arms around her, resting his chin on the top of her head. His eye lit up with humor as the guys walked away angrily. He turned her around to face him, and handed her a Hersey's kiss.


message 20: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) "I'm going to be obese and/or diabetic if we continue to be friends." Rumor told him before putting the sweet candy in her mouth. She moaned in pleasure before winking at him. "Thank you."


message 21: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) "Well I've been dying to give you a kiss," he replied with a corny line, but a giant grin. Enjoying the wink he got from her, "You look adorable, by the way. Though I hope you didn't decide to come commando in that dress." He looked at all of the people and saw someone who looked familiar to him, close to the bar.

((Should Seb know Aly lol, or Carver? I'm thinking Seb since Kayla's not on :?))


message 22: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) ((When is Kayla(view spoiler) going to come into the picture?))


message 23: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) "If you wanted a kiss you could of just asked, Seb." Rumor joked with him, "And why thank you. You don't looks so bad for a male model either." She smirked at him, she wore a bright red lipstick color and it make the color of her eyes stand out even more. "And If i'm commando, you'll never know."


message 24: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) ((After the party I think, the press can catch them leaving together?))

"Oh how I wish that statement wasn't true. I would really love to know," he winked as he joked with her, "And I'm glad that you think I look nice..." He trailed off, "Hey follow me." he grabbed Rumor's hand pulled her along with him. He walked over to a tall girl with long curly brown hair. She was talking to a tough looking guy, odd he didn't think that was Aly's type.

"Hmm, then what shall we do for the moment being, master?" Aly cheekily replied, flashing him a playful smile as she looked up at him.

Sebastian heard Aly say, right before he picked her up and spun her around, "Hey there Aly-Cat!"


message 25: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) "Wh-what? Why?" Rumor complained as he pulled her through the mass of people and over to the bar where Gage Woods, the owner of the Yacht stood with some girl She didn't recognize. Even in her heels, Rumor wasn't as tall as the mystery girl.

Gage looked up to see a guy who was sorta familiar walking over with a short pretty girl who looked just as confused as him. Who was this guy and why was he calling Aly, Aly-cat.


message 26: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) Aly let out a yelp as she was spun around in the air. She was unsteady on her heels, when she was set down. She turned to the person who called her Aly-Cat. It was Sebastian, Aly's jaw dropped! "Sebastian? What are you doing here?" she gave him a friendly hug, and turned to Gage, "This is Sebastian, his mother works for my parent's law firm."

Sebastian chuckled, "I came here on a date actually. This is Rumor."

"You? On an actual date? Wow, I didn't think that would ever happen since Kayla!" Aly offered Rumor her hand, she was exited to hear about this girl. She was the first person Sebastian had taken on a date in over a year.


message 27: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) ((I made the character creation pages for howl))


message 28: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) ((I seen that, I updated the back info...I'm thinking I used too many rhetorical questions lol))


message 29: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) ((Ehhh I think it's ok))


message 30: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) ((Haha okay XD))


message 31: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) "Use the term date loosely, I was promised candy." Rumor said joking with the rest of them. She was an easy person to get along with as long as you didn't piss her off. She is hard to talk down when she is angry. She could stay that way for a while.

"Nice to meet you, man." Gage said shaking Sebastian's hand quickly before ordering another beer.


message 32: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) "Ouch, you wound my pride at every turn, Rumor!" Sebastian pretended to be hurt, Aly just rolled her eyes. Sebastian sized Gage up, he thought again how he didn't know this guy was Aly's type. "Nice to meet you too." Sebastian ordered a beer with him.

"So Aly-Cat, how have you been? And how's Alpha?" Alpha was Aly's dog, the same dog that attacked him for shaking her hand once.

"It's nice to meet you Rumor, I can see you'll keep Sebbie on his toes." Aly laughed at her joke, and turned to Sebastian, "He's good, he's actually in Immortal Beach, he still hates you though!"


message 33: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) "Oh sorry, did I bruise your jumbo sized ego sweetheart?" Rumor mockingly patted his arm, "I'm sure one of the girls that can't stop staring at you could kiss it all better." There were at least a dozen girls eying Sebastian and Rumor had noticed them the moment they had met up by the railing.


message 34: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) Aly laughed, and walked over to the stupid girls. When she walked back, the girls had practically ran away. She clap her hands together as if she was wiping of dust, "I guess you'll have to be the one to kiss it better now." she gave Rumor a playful smile.

Sebastian chuckled at Aly and Rumor, he could see them being good friends. "I'll take that kiss whenever," he winked at Rumor.


message 35: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) Reaching into her purse, Rumor pulled out a Hershey's kiss. She always carried some kind of candy with her and tonight it happened to be kisses, "Here's your kiss, pretty boy." she tossed it to him, she found it funny that both Seb and her had brought kisses. Turning she caught the eye of a bitchy looking blonde. Rumor had no problem returning the glare.


message 36: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) Aly laughed and looked at Gage, he had been quiet throughout this whole thing and she wanted him to answer her question. She opened her mouth to ask him if he was okay, but Sebastian asked her a question. "So Aly-Cat, how long have you and Gage been dating?"
Aly looked at Gage with a playful smirk, "Oh we're not dating, I just belong to him for the time being."

Sebastian's eyes widened, but he didn't comment, he just slightly narrowed his eyes at Gage. It was an unspoken warning, hurt Aly and I hurt you kind of warning. Sebastian sighed, "Well on that note, Rumor and I should be off. This is a great party so far Gage, Aly we should have lunch sometime." He grabbed Rumor's hand and lead her back towards the dance floor.


message 37: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) Gage almost choked on his beer when Sebastian asked Aly how long they had been dating. Clearing his throat Gage met Aly's eye, "Well that was awkward."

As Seb pulled her away, Rumor lost eye contact with the jealous looking girl. Shrugging it off, Rumored leaned into Sebastian's side as they walked towards the dance floor. The music had changed now and it was a heavier base song.

Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IaZMS...


message 38: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) "Was it?" Aly mused, "He didn't seem to like you very much, he even gave you the "look". That's kind of funny. But don't worry if he doesn't like you, because I like you." Aly laughed as she gave Gage a flirty wink. "By the way, you ever answered my question, mister." she pointed her finger at him.

Sebastian smiled as Rumor got close to him, "So are you enjoying yourself so far?" He looked down at her, happy that he was here with the best looking girl at the party. Rumor surprised him with the kiss thing, he was amused they were so much alike.


message 39: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) "Well that's all that matters," Gage said, smirking at her, "And I'm sorry I don't remember your question" He said feigning innocence.

Rumor nodded, "Yes I am." she told him, "So whats your history with Aly?" She asked curiously.


message 40: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) "Oh you don't, do you? Well that's too bad. Would you like me to remind you?" Aly replied with a smirk of her own. Moving slightly closer to him now that Seabastian and Rumor had left.

"History?" Sebastian burst into laughter, "Well my mom works for her parents. Her mom and my mom are best friends, they did try to get us to date once. But it never happened though, we have always just been best friends. Though we haven't talked in a few years."


message 41: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) "No, you don't have to remind me, I remember" Suddenly this was feeling all too serious for Gage. He had known her for a day, he didn't know why he was already staking his claim. claim, god that made he sound like he should be peeing circles around her. "Aly I'm still emotionally damaged, I don't know why I said what I did."

Rumor mouthed "oh" before turning her head away from him to hide her blush. She didn't know why she felt so possessive over him already. She didn't like the way that all the girls were staring at him or the way that he brought emotions she tried to keep suppressed out. When she turned her eyes landed on a girl who's mouth was hanging open as she practically undressed Seb with her eyes, "Hey honey you got a little drool right there." Rumor snapped at the girl who's eyes widened in shock and quickly walked away.


message 42: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) Aly frowned, "Look Gage, I like you a lot. Your actually the first guy I've ever really liked. I could try to help you work through this, if you want me too. But I don't want to let myself possibly fall for you, just to have you push me away. So you need to let me know what you want...your mixed signals are giving me whiplash." Aly sighed and rubbed her temples with her fingers.

Sebastian gave Rumor an amused look, "You know, for a girl not on a date with me, you are sure acting like it." It actually worried Sebastian, he wondered if Rumor could handle his world. Drooling girls came with the job title, and would never leave them alone. He hoped she could handle it because he really liked her.


message 43: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) "Let's just be honest here Seb. You and I both know that this really was a date." Rumor rolled her eyes and smirked at him. "Besides you're helping be with my goal of diabetes by thirty so you're the perfect date." She said thinking of the candy he had given her.

"I know I'm sorry Aly. Just be patient with me." Gage pleaded with her.


message 44: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) "Oh I am, am I? Well, that's great Rumor, I'm glad you said that. Drooling girls come with the territory, you need to know that. And if we are together, I will only have eyes for you. Trust is everything to me, so I will need you to trust me." Sebastian smiled down at her, holding his hand out for her to hold.

"How about we do something fun?" Aly suggested, Gaga needed some fun in his life. His parents had made him grow up too fast, so she was going to make sure he still had fun. And she had the perfected idea...well somewhat perfect.


message 45: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) "I'm strong enough to deal with the drooling girls. I'm not saying I like it, but I can deal with it." Rumor told him, "I do trust you. I don't know why, but I do." Rumor rubbed at her scared wrists that she kept hidden with multiple wrap bracelets,

"Alright, what do you have in mind?" Gage asked her curiously.


message 46: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) "Good. I trust you too, which is just as odd for me." Sebastian grabbed her hands, and planted a kiss on each of her wrists. He gave her a small smile, hoping that didn't upset her.

"Well I see a stage, and a mic...I'm thinking we should sing. Maybe a duet? I know you said you played but I figured you could sing too." Aly's eyes lit up with excitement.

((Broken by Seether and Amy Lee would be a good song for them lol))


message 47: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) Rumor's eyes filled with panic and worry as he brought her wrists up to his mouth and kissed them. Why would he do such a thing? wasn't he freaked out and disgusted by them.

"Uhh, I don't know Aly...I'm not supposed to be performing or doing anything music orientated. My dad doesn't like it." Gage needed his dad or more like his money, if he ever had a chance of leaving immortal beach.


message 48: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) Sebastian caught her look, "Everyone deals with grief in their own way, it's not for other people to judge." he pushed a strand of hair behind her ear, and kissed her cheek. "Would you like to dance?" Sebastian hoped she would say yes, she admitted to being his date. So this would make his night perfect. He loved how he felt normal around her.

"Really? I guess it makes since that our dads are friends. My dad doesn't like me to do anything music related too. But, I don't see my dad here right now, so I'm going to risk it," Aly smiled softly at him, "If you want to, you can blame it on me. If not then, I guess I could just sing for you. I need to prove that I can sing out of the shower."


message 49: by Kayleigh (new)

Kayleigh (kayleighkingwrites) Rumor nodded, but she still didn't like advertising her scars. She hardly ever cut anymore but she still did when she got really low. "I'd love to." She said giving him a small smile.

"My dad pays people to keep an eye on me. Like my old high school friends would tell my dad what I'd done that day or people at the country club report to my dad at the end of the day about my actions." Gage said sadly.


message 50: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) "Great!" Sebastian lead her out to the dance floor and began moving to the beat. He was a pretty good dancer, Aly had taught him. He smiled at that, he used to be mad at her for it, but now he was grateful. He smiled at Rumor.

"Really? Wow, your dad is a psycho! I thought my dad was crazy, hopefully they don't compare notes!" Aly joked but, she was serious as well. "So what should we do then?" she wondered if he would dance with her. She didn't think so, but then again he might.


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