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message 1: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod



message 2: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
Ash lays low to the ground as he sneaks up from behind the house. Blood lays on the concrete in the back from his wippings.


message 3: by Gamzee Trash (new)

Gamzee Trash (tiny_bird) Otto does the same and follows him.


Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) Essence gets down on her stomach and crawls behind Otto.


message 5: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
Ash looks at her, "You don't have to be that low." He laughs quietly. He then squats down next to his window, he lived in the basement. He opens the slidder which only had minumul space, "I'll pass stuff up." He whispers as he shimmies into the room.


message 6: by Gamzee Trash (new)

Gamzee Trash (tiny_bird) Otto nodded and awaited for stuff to be passed up.


Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) Essence waited next to Otto.


message 8: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
"If you hear someone coming, run." He whispers to them before he disapears into the darkness of his room. The walls cracking and chipping away. His bed a matress on the floor. He grabs a bag and starts filling it with cloths quietly. He didn't hear anyone home yet, so he was safe, for now. He then turns and grabs his paints, spray paints that is from under a shelf. He packs them in a seperate bag along with his sketch book and pencils. He grabs his guitar pick and guitar. He hands up the guitar and says, "Careful, she's my baby." Then his paints and cloths.


message 9: by Gamzee Trash (new)

Gamzee Trash (tiny_bird) Otto took the guitar carefully then handed it to Essence. Then she grabbed the paint and back of clothes. "Let's go before someone comes"Otto whispered to Ash.


message 10: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) She took the guitar and held on to it. She then looked around Otto to see Ash.


message 11: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
Ash whispers back up, "'Aint done." He says running back and grabbing his knife. He smiles at the blade and flips it back so the blade isn't showing. He then puts it in his pocket and grabs his picks and sticks.


message 12: by Gamzee Trash (new)

Gamzee Trash (tiny_bird) Otto sighed and was feeling anxious.


message 13: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) Essence looked around her to make sure no one was coming.


message 14: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
He then hears a door slam from upstairs and people walking down the stairs, "Damn it." Ash cusses quietly and then starts getting out of the window franticly, "Run, Run!" He yells as he gets his legs up, his leg getting caught on the window and ripping a bit.


message 15: by Gamzee Trash (new)

Gamzee Trash (tiny_bird) Otto's eyes flashed with fear. "Just follow me!"she said before starting a sprint towards her own house with Ash's items.


message 16: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) Essence stayed trying to help him free his leg, "I cant leave him."


message 17: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
Ash flips out his knife and cuts away the fabric right as his dad busts into the room, Ash then gets out and pulls her up, "Run!"


message 18: by Gamzee Trash (new)

Gamzee Trash (tiny_bird) "Come on! This way!"Otto calls. She had stopped at the edge of the forest to wait for them.


message 19: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) She follows Ash running at the same pace as him.


message 20: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
sh then busts into the forest by his house and hides behind a tree. He pants as he catches his breath.


message 21: by Gamzee Trash (new)

Gamzee Trash (tiny_bird) Otto waits for him to catch his breath. "We should go NOW. I can teleport us to my house. It may feel weird though"Otto said, her eyes darting between the girl and Ash


message 22: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (last edited Mar 31, 2013 10:30PM) (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
Ash hears gun fires and turns around, his father was trying to get out of the basement, "What's wrong fat man? Can't squeeze through?" He asks with a harsh, evilish laugh in his voice. He could tourch him right now if he wanted.... make his worst nightmares come true.... A glint of evil flashes in his eyes before Ash slaps himself hard across the face, "No." He says softly, returning to normal.


message 23: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "You guys can go," she looks back at the house, "I can hold him off." She spread her arms out ready to use her powers.


message 24: by Gamzee Trash (new)

Gamzee Trash (tiny_bird) Otto was creeped out by Ash's personality change. She inched away from him.


message 25: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
Ash looks up at her, "Leave him be. He's just screwed up." He then starts walking, "Plus, this isn't your fight." He was quiet. He took her hand, "Come on."


message 26: by Gamzee Trash (new)

Gamzee Trash (tiny_bird) ((To the Shadow Castle!))


message 27: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) She looked at Otto, "Um, I dont know," she didnt want to intrude, "I think I should go to the forest."


message 28: by Gamzee Trash (new)

Gamzee Trash (tiny_bird) Otto ignored her and walked to her house.


message 29: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
Ash looked at her, "Leave him be." He says to her.


message 30: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "I dont mean fight your dad, silly" she frowns, "I mean go to my house," she then leans into Ash and whispers, "I dont think she likes me, and I dont want to intrude."


message 31: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
"Just come with me." He whispers holding her, "I'll feel weird...."


message 32: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) "Okay," she bumps him playfully, "for you." She smiles.


message 33: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
He smiels and leads her to the house.


message 34: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
Ash walks to the house, he was in the back of the forest when he looked apon the house, he seen where the bullets had gone though. He didn't step foreward though, he fell to his knees and started sobbing, he couldn't go back to the castle, he couldn't go home or he would die. He couldn't go to the forest. He couldn't go anywhere!


message 35: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) ((Poor Ash, he's been through so much :( ))


message 36: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
((I feel his pain....))


message 37: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) ((Aw poor Kat! I've missed you girly its been like days))


message 38: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
((I know right? Dude, this is so stressful!))


message 39: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) ((Yup, life has been nothing without Kat, lol, since then I've gotten like addicted to this site))


message 40: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
((I've been addicted for about a year now.))


message 41: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) ((I will always remember your group as the one that got me hooked :D))


message 42: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
((Haha! Yes!))


message 43: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) ((You do have the best group there is, just saying, lol))


message 44: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
(( awes thank you!!!!))


message 45: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) ((Your so welcome! Lol sorry for all the spam, I'm just bored, people have started going to bed))


message 46: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
((Heh, I actually have to go right now. Night! And the spam is fine. I'll clean it up later.))


message 47: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) ((Nighty Night Kat! :D))


message 48: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
Ash then hears a bang from the inside of his house and looks at it in shock, sounded like another gun shot. He looks in horror to the house as he hides behind a tree. He waits for a little bit and then slowly starts to walk to the house, his things are left by the trees. His feet crunch the grass from under his feet as he looks down into his bedroom, nothing there, just the bullet holes, He thought this would be the safest way in. He then jumped in and landed softly, making no noise at all.

He then opened his door after listening to find out where any movement was, there was no sound, nor movement. His heart pounded inside of his chest as he runs upstairs, not caring anymore. He looks around and then sees a hand curled up. His eyes widden as he goes to it, when he turns the corner he finds his father, a bullet hole through his chest and the gun in his hand. Ash screams as he runs to his father's side. Tears going down his face. "Dad, no!" He wails trying to shaking him awake, looking around, but knowing there would be no help. He tries countless ways to wake him, to bring him back, but nothing helps.... his father is gone....

"I'm so sorry." Ash whispers as he sobs over his father's body. "I'm so sorry...."

((I about cried writing this.))


message 49: by Ms_Sara_Darling (new)

Ms_Sara_Darling (MsSaraDarling) ((Oh my god! No words can describe what an awesome writer you are! I'm honestly tearing up!))


message 50: by Kate Kid, Head Freak (new)

Kate Kid (katekid) | 1437 comments Mod
((haha, thank you! :D ))

After a few minutes of panic, he got up and went to his phone, dialing 911 shakily and started speaking to the operator, telling her what had just happened. Later on, the ambulance came with two cop cars, two cops along with each car. A woman cop takes him to the side, "Are you alright?"

Ash doesn't know what to say, he just shakes his head no. She looks at him saddly, "Do you have a mother?"

Ash bites his lip hard again, tears streaming down his face, "No." he shakes.


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