Young Writers discussion

I'm skimming the first part right now…it's late and I'm being harassed at the moment so I'll read the rest later, but I just wanted to let you know that I'm hooked. The idea of the dead telling their story is awfully cliche, but the writing for this is really interesting.

This story is absolutely beautiful. The characters are depicted perfectly over the course of the chapters, aided by the wonderful descriptive sentences.

I loved this story a lot. Even if it is a little cliché. ^w^