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Prologe
When the earth was being formed, there was already Fire, rock, and Air. Water was mostly frozen, as Ice.
The Gods were the first things created. After all the gods had left for the heavens to become Immortal, two of them stayed. IIia, the goddess of Air and Fire, As well as her husband, Horus. The God of Earth and water. Ilia gave birth to four girls. Calla, Ica, Rema, and Darcie.
Darcie became the Gardena of Fire, Ica became the Gardena of Water, Rema became the Gardena of Earth, and Calla became the Gardena of Air.
Along with them, Their parents made the Guardians. They were the workers of The four Element sisters. The Guardians would be in the real world, well they're mistresses watch over they're realm.
Long ago, just after the Guardians were created, this happened.
Death found out that The four elements had "Soldiers". So he created some for his own benefit. He made creatures, Goblins, that would help him with his duties. He wanted other minions. He became greedy.
He made Shadows. But, he could not control them. They had minds of their own. They were powerful. Only their true master could keep them at bay. So Death sent out a Goblin to find Destiny. The only one who knows the location of the Shadows master.
Chapter One
I was just sleeping in my beloved home. When there was a knock on the door. It couldn't have been anyone I knew. My friends always did three light taps. Other's more important, like the Guardians and the Gardenia's, knock once, then say something using their element. It's complex.
But this knock, it made a weird sound. Boom. Crackle. Boom. I didn't know who it was. So I put on my black cloak, and the shoes that made me taller. You see, I'm about 3 and a half feet tall. My shoes make me about 4'6.
Anyway, I walked over to the door and peeked my head outside." Yes..? What is it?"
The goblin looked more normal than most." Hello miss. Is Ms. Destiny home? I would like to speak with her. Please." He was in a cloak as well. His skin looked only like he'd slept in the rain and muck for a few days. So brown and a little wrinkled, bits of green.
I didn't know he was goblin at the time. So I let him in." Alright. She's home. I'll show you to the sitting room. "
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3... Full story
When the earth was being formed, there was already Fire, rock, and Air. Water was mostly frozen, as Ice.
The Gods were the first things created. After all the gods had left for the heavens to become Immortal, two of them stayed. IIia, the goddess of Air and Fire, As well as her husband, Horus. The God of Earth and water. Ilia gave birth to four girls. Calla, Ica, Rema, and Darcie.
Darcie became the Gardena of Fire, Ica became the Gardena of Water, Rema became the Gardena of Earth, and Calla became the Gardena of Air.
Along with them, Their parents made the Guardians. They were the workers of The four Element sisters. The Guardians would be in the real world, well they're mistresses watch over they're realm.
Long ago, just after the Guardians were created, this happened.
Death found out that The four elements had "Soldiers". So he created some for his own benefit. He made creatures, Goblins, that would help him with his duties. He wanted other minions. He became greedy.
He made Shadows. But, he could not control them. They had minds of their own. They were powerful. Only their true master could keep them at bay. So Death sent out a Goblin to find Destiny. The only one who knows the location of the Shadows master.
Chapter One
I was just sleeping in my beloved home. When there was a knock on the door. It couldn't have been anyone I knew. My friends always did three light taps. Other's more important, like the Guardians and the Gardenia's, knock once, then say something using their element. It's complex.
But this knock, it made a weird sound. Boom. Crackle. Boom. I didn't know who it was. So I put on my black cloak, and the shoes that made me taller. You see, I'm about 3 and a half feet tall. My shoes make me about 4'6.
Anyway, I walked over to the door and peeked my head outside." Yes..? What is it?"
The goblin looked more normal than most." Hello miss. Is Ms. Destiny home? I would like to speak with her. Please." He was in a cloak as well. His skin looked only like he'd slept in the rain and muck for a few days. So brown and a little wrinkled, bits of green.
I didn't know he was goblin at the time. So I let him in." Alright. She's home. I'll show you to the sitting room. "
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3... Full story
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