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Here's the topic where you can create a Commoner. Try to be as detailed as possible.

Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Clothing:
Weapons:
Rank(Duchess, Duke, Priest, etc):
Personality(At least 4-5 sentences):
History(At least 4-5 sentences):
Likes:
Dislikes:
Skills:
Family:

Name: Simon de Montfort
Age: 24

Appearance:


Clothing: Simon always wear this black and white color combination. He does not like any ruffles or designs but he likes to wear plain ones even though has a high rank.
Weapons: 2 push daggers strapped to his arms

Rank(Duchess, Duke, Priest, etc): Duke of Trewnwell

Personality(At least 4-5 sentences): He is very honest no matter what the consequences are, to the point he is considered rude by other people. He has the courage to do what’s right in those tough situations and loyalty to his friends and loved ones. However he is kind of conceited to those who do not know him that well. He is patient as well and can soothe any ruffled feathers of anyone.

History(At least 4-5 sentences): He was the man he is now, quiet and thoughtful because there was this accident that happened to his brother that was his fault. His adopted mother persuaded that it was not fault but because of him his brother, Keenan, and his parents died. He was being all high and mighty that day so he vowed to himself that he will not mind his riches, as he was now orphaned, and work on his own as a simple blacksmith.

Likes: Simon likes to spend all his day creating and sharpening all his weapons.
Dislikes: He dislikes those who are arrogant and pompous.
Skills: He has the skills to create one of the best weapons in his time and he can wield them as well.
Family: His parents and his brother are dead. Adopted mother, Lady Geraldine.

Accepted

Thanks :]

First name: Neliet
Middle name: Melmark
Last name: Tu Obdershvank
Gender: Male
Age: 19
{Date of Birth} January Twenty Fifth
{Place of Birth} Germanic Region

Rank: Peasant
Occupation: Odd Job Man, Stable Boy
Neliet works odd jobs, primarily what people don't want to do. He sees it as honest work that keeps food on the table and a roof over his head. As a Stable boy, he worked in pretty much which ever one was short of hands. He is mostly in the Royal Stables, although he believes most of the royalty to be stuck up brats who had no idea of how to properly take care of their horses.

Personality:
Trait 1: Devoted
Trait 2: Diligent
Trait 3: Nurturing
Trait 4: Jovial
Trait 5: Artistic

All for you, I'd do it
Neliet is a very devoted person. He takes care in the work he does and doesn't give up on the person he cares for. One would refer to this as loyalty, but loyalty sounds far too weak for his degree of devotion. Be that the person is convicted of something, he will defend them at every turn. If something interests him to the point that it takes up a lot of his time, he will stick to it anyways. Devotion to him isn't just an eight letter word. It's a part of him that he won't give up.

Hard work pays off
Neliet is diligent in his work. He likes to keep to a schedule of how to do things, as it gets work going along faster. His diligence is what has him working so many jobs. He rarely takes breaks from his work, and many of his employers worry about that aspect of his diligence. Other employers see this as perfect, and he doesn't exactly appreciate their lack of concern.

Nurture vs. Nature
Neliet exudes a nurturing aura about him. This aspect of his personality makes him work well with children. Older women usually speak of him fondly, as they wish they'd been as lucky enough to have him. He usually takes time out of his day to interact with the local children, despite what his outer appearance can often convey. This nurturing attitude comes from being in a family in which he was the oldest.

For he's a jolly good fellow
Neliet is a jovial person. He's usually happy, or making other people around him happy. He doesn't always smile, but his happiness is clear in other ways. He has an optimistic view of things, and tries to make other people see the bright side to their situation. He can have his moody moments of despair and unhappiness, but it's thoroughly pushed down to the depths of his mind to focus on the better things.

An artist's soul is the most fragile soul; treat it well
Neliet is artistic. He doesn't often get to paint or draw, but he loves to do so. His work isn't always done by conventional means. He uses whatever he has near by that leaves some sort of mark, other than dung. Because of this facet of his personality, he has a different approach to a lot of common problems. He thinks in a way that's different from others, and this allows him to do things in a way that turns out a bit more successful.

Appearance:

Neliet is of average height, somewhere in the middle of five feet. He weighs in at around a hundred forty-five, most of which is a bit of muscle weight. He's not lanky, but muscled enough to suffice for his line of work. His has long limbs, but they are still proportional with the rest of his body. His shoulders are broad and wide, but not of the average male width. They're slightly slender and feminine, but he doesn't much care for it. His complexion is fair, with his face dotted with a few freckles.

His hair is a raven black, with little strands of blonde mixed in. It's an odd trait that comes from his mother's side of the family. His eyes are a hazel brown, but look like a honey brown hue when the light hits them to be brighter as opposed to the stormy gray when a darker angle is cast on them. He has a scar on his left cheek from a rabid cat he once had to subdue.

His voice is soft and deep, a comforting sound for many that he speaks with.
Clothing: Neliet wears a collected ensemble of working clothes, seeing as he has a lot of work to do
Weakness(es):
-beautiful women
-small children
-good food
-being around royals

Strength(s):
-cooking
-painting
-physical strength
-horseback riding

Brief Biography/History:
Neliet was born the eldest son of a family of artistic minds. Each person had some sort of medium by which they went about this, excluding his mother. What she took to instead, was the art of maternal love. He was greatly supported by both of his parents, but there came a time when he needed to leave them behind to start anew.

Biggest Fear: The death of family. He loves his family more than anything, and if he were to lose them he'd hit rock bottom. They supported him in every way, and without that, he feels he is nothing

Relations:
Mother: Hildagarde
Father: Xanderbilt {Deceased: Old Age}
Sister: Marivelle
2nd Sister: Carivelle {Twin to Marivelle}
Brother: Avangeluc


Weapon(s):
Neliet isn't one to fight others. He won't use a weapon as he sees them as an advantage that should be earned. He's more of a hand to hand fighter, and can take a good fight.

Fighting Skill(s):
-Hand to hand combat
It was suggested by his mother as a means of protection. He didn't want to make her worry, so he complied and took up the skill
-Archery
He uses this only for hunting. It isn't meant to be a skill to kill or harm others, in his opinion.

Other:

Accepted

Thanks!

Haha, no problem! Your charries are awesome :)

Thanks >3<

Name: Rachel Workman
age: 19
appearance: brown hair, blue freckles, has a scar on her arm and an upturned nose
clothing: whatever she can get for cheap
weapons: always carries a knife and a gun of some kind
rank: peasant
personality: Rachel is shy and stubborn. She is also clumsy. She's good with children. She can be flighty and deceptive. She is naive. She is fearless to a fault. Rachel does;t forgive easily. She doesn't like to make mistakes. Additionally, she is slow in making decisions due to wanting to over analyze things.
weaknesses:
food
staying up late
alcohol
strengths:
analyzing
cooking
knitting
scrap booking
Brief history: Rachel grew up as the oldest of seven children which caused her to only grow up with the necessities. Her family had to scrape by. They took a lot of hand-outs from soup kitchens. What little money they had came from her parents; odd jobs Her upbringing made her want a better life for her children.
biggest fear: Her biggest fear is being rejected hwen men find out the details of her past.
mother: Shanna
father: Matthew
sisters: Collette, Elena, Mariah, and Michele
brothers: Andrew, Callum, and Ryan
fighting skills;
archery
good at using her gun
knows martial arts

Can you add a bit to the personality?

She is naive. She's also fearless to a fault. Rachel doesn't forgive easily. She doesn't like to make mistakes. Additionally, she tends to slow in making decision due to wanting over analyze things.

Does this work?

Yup, just edit that part nto your comment.