The Pen Is Mightier Than The Sword discussion

Links to thing's I've written:

Short Stories
*Inordinate
The Symptom and its sequel, The Disease
Distant Eyes
*The Edge
The Leap We Must Take
*This Weightlessness
Before The Storm
*Lake Mors
*Moth
Twilight: How It Should Have Ended

Poems
Collection of Poems (includes Maybe I'm Dead, Betrayal, Heart Of Glass, All Of You, Everyone's A Stranger, Forever and Always, If You'll Have Me, Invincible, One Last Time, Fearless, and Blue Eyes)

Books
Something Else Entirely (This has been taken down, but I'll put it back up as soon as I get to editing!)
Like The Stars


*Ones I recommend you read first

All comments and critiques (critiques are good), please put ON THE STORIES, not in this thread. Please and thank you!

If you need some inspiration or you just need to feel loved (whether you're Christian or not), click here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3.... I've posted a mix of things in the devotionals I read with bits of my own thoughts. Hopefully something about one (or more) of these will bring you hope. (Comments ON the link, not here. Please and thank you)

I finally got around to writing another short story! Right now, it's called "Something Like Fate," but if you have any other title suggestions, let me know by commenting on it. Here's the link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3.... I need some brutal critiques, so please post them on the story, not here to let me know how I can edit and improve this. Thank you so much!

I am very happy to present the first chapter to my new book, Like The Stars. I am currently working on it, but plan to be finished by June 30th. After that, I'll just take a few days to edit and then it'll all be up here. Please comment letting me know what you think, but on the story please, not here! Link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

I posted a deleted scene from my first book, Something Else Entirely. If you wanna read it, click the link! Leave a comment on the story letting me know what you think.

I added the second and third chapters to Like The Stars. Please give this a quick look and comment on the story letting me know what I can improve! (Please don't comment on this topic) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Hey guys! It's been a while since I've written anything short though I have gotten four books written now, so here are two new things! Please check them out and comment on the stories please, not here.

A poem called "I am too happy to fall asleep"

and a short story in verse called A Boy Named Bailey .

Thank you guys so much! God bless!

Another short thing, this time in the form of a letter.

Every Reason I Love You

Please let me know what you think and comment on the story please, not here. Thank you so much!

Some of you may remember my book, Something Else Entirely, that I took down a few years ago. Hopefully, you'll be happy to hear that it is back up! Happy reading! https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...