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Apr 08, 2009 08:26PM

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Freshly clipped from their stems and arranged
Are flowers galore from floral shops
There are carnations and chrysanthemums
Tulips and hydrangeas
Irises and daffodils
Lilacs, lilies and queen and lace
Rhododendron
Poppy and goldenrod
Lady’s-slipper, violet
And roses
Red, pink, and white
Obscuring the closed casket

A Glass Dove
Once clear as air
Slowly became Obsidian
darker than a crow at night.
She strived to fly, to soar,
To glide withthe rest.
and yet,
She remained near the ground.
One day she just stopped;
Gave up trying to soar.
and fell quickly down,
Shattering on the floor.
Her wings were now gone,
Her tail in a mess.
They patched her up,
but she could not heal
Until she was once more Glass.
Time passed and nothing changed,
She hid her jagged edges
and tried not to be in pain.
But then one day it happened;
She became once more Clear,
And banished were the sharp aches
Of her Obsidian Years.
She was happy, she was hopeful
And tried once more to fly.
She succeeded, yes she did,
but it was as if she were a Wright,
for her flight was short lived.
and when it was over,
She again turned black as night.
Now this is where she rests,
Almost too alone to survive
While others pray for her,
And hope she can once more be
A Glass Dove.

A lonely man
On a lonely road
Stops by a pond.
Hopping in fully clothed,
The man shouts
And releases his joy
To all the world.
From all the houses
In all the towns
Come the children,
So they can know
The reason for his shout.
He calls to them,
"I am free
And you will be too,
If you just join me!"
Some of the children,
They went home.
Others stayed,
But only to watch.
And yet others still,
stripped of their clothes
and plunged in with the man,
rightfully so.
The swam and they laughed,
each to their own,
Until they drifted
And were all alone.
They got out of the pool,
gathered their clothes,
but they never went home,
Each becoming
A lonely man
On a lonely road.

Poetry (noun)-art of rhythmical composition
(hopefully Marley won't see that)

Love
Love does not envy.
For all love will always stay.
Love is never doubt.

"YES! Delete it! I was waiting for you to say that!" or
"No! You should let people criticize your work! It'll help you learn to write better."
or
"I don't feel like making sense."

Oh, BTW if you want, you guys can critique mine.

Oh, BTW if you want, you guys can critique mine."
Okay. We'll try. Of course, there'll probably be nothing to critique. *looks at poems again*
I don't know how to critique poetry! Sorry! I would if I knew how.
Lauren wrote: "Geek speak, I like.
I meant keep it. "
Okay. Just got confused. Again.

What's after that again?
Maybe I should stop singing. I think Veronica wanted us to talk about poetry.
*hums quietly*

Every morning,
I am awestruck
by the palette of colors
from the rising of the sun.
They are brilliant and bold,
yet soft and gentle
at the same time.
There are reds,oranges,blues,
yellows, pinks, and purples
sweeping across the sky.
The mountain peaks
are of a purplish color.
The mountains stand there
majestically daring anything,
except astral objects
in the sky,
to be higher than them.
The peaks stand with
a snowy layer that lasts most of the year.
As we head grocery shopping,
the car gets closer and
nearer to the mountains.
The ride is a crap shoot
whether you will come back alive.
It whirls and twirls like girls
throwing a baton.
The thoroughfare also undulated
like a roller coaster.
Some guy is passing us on the
path at a much too dangerous speed.
As we go further and further
up the mountain,
we see a beautiful green covering of trees.
Pine trees abound,
with their sharp, little green needles
in a swirling pattern around the trees.
There are also the pine cones
with tan layers upon dark brown undercoats
in a somewhat triangular shape.
The aroma will make your sense of smell purr.
These trees go higher and higher
up the mountain,
but they are not near the peaks.
As we head back to the house,
there is the sun going down.
Once again there are a multitude
of spectacular colors.
There were blues, purples,
grays, pinks, oranges, and reds.
They form a swirling motion
much like stirring
the dough for cookies.
We returned home safe and sound.
I did what I have been
trying to do all day: respire.
It is hard to inhale
from higher elevation,
and as much as I try,
I never find a good breath of air.
I loved seeing my sister.
It was really a blast,
but I'd rather breathe than stay.
Randi

Ahh...I actually feel like I'm there.


I really need to calm down before people think I have some kind of problem...

*goes to look at Perpenicularandi's poetry*


Karate kicking koalas kidnap kind kingdom kitchen keepers.
Religious rabbits repair responsible resident restaurant restrooms.
I'm working on hyperboles, and it's kinda hard. My theme is zoo animals, and it's HARD!

I've learned a few different words today! Hyperbole, evanescent, and beguiling! And one other one, that I can't remember right now...
I've never been good at poetry since I read Dr. Seuss, although I was a kid fan. Mary Had A Little Lamb is not as bad as . . . Beautiful Baboon Ballerina . . . Biking Backwards . . . Black Bug's Banana Boxes. I can't remember the rest. Ugh, I'll have to go to the library and check it out.

Personification:
The gift shop door squealed with delight.
Four line rhymes:
#1:
It is now hunting season,
We are hunting for a duck.
We only want one for the zoo,
But we're going to need a lot of luck!
#2:
When times at the zoo get rougher,
The animals will start to suffer.
When animals start to die,
All the workers will cry.
(hehe, I stole that one from the prologue of my story.)
#3:
We have gone to Australia.
We are not dressed in regalia.
We got an idea from Aleah.
We should name the found emu Amelia.
I'm struggling with the fourth one. The theme is zoo, and the rhyming pattern is a-b-a-b.

I remember when we had to do this in school...luckily they change the formatting, so you do much more free-versing and more interesting prompts. :)

Four line rhyme scheme poems
Limerick
Cinquain
Haiku
Tanka
Acrostic
Couplet
Alliteration
Simile
Metaphor
Hyperbole
Personifications
Diamante
Recipe Poem
Concrete Poem
Animal Family Poem
Sensory Poem
Blank Verse
We have to write all these "POEMS" and then make it into a POETRY POWER POINT PROJECT.



I didn't even know what one was until march, but now that I know how to write them, I love them!
A young boy stares at the stars
And dreams about driving cars.
He thinks they are a wonder
And never that they are a blunder
When driven away from bars