Broken-Hearted and Confused discussion

If you have any poetry you'd like to share!

When I was young I loved to play
In the grass, and in the hay
I became older and lost way
Then my life fades away
Then my life fades away

I awake in a brand new age
Ready to play a brand new game
New friends to help me find my way
Revenge is the game I play
Be my friend and play

Aw,I like it, E.B.

http://www.writing.com/main/portfolio...

Most of my poetry is posted on there. :)

What has happened to me?
All I feel is regret
Things I'll never forgive
Things I'll never forget

Through all these broken years
Lost my heart, lost my mind
Looking for the closure
I know I'll never find

I understand that I've hurt
A lot of people too
But you need to believe
These days are ones I rue

Does no one ever stop
And think "what about her?"
I'm always wishing things
Go back to how they were

Every day I become
Worse than the day before
I've lost my simple world
It cuts me to the core

But I'm not what I've done
And to a small degree
I'm still an innocent
I am still only me

(This one is one of the ones I have published in literary magazines.)

Apoorva wrote: "What has happened to me?
All I feel is regret
Things I'll never forgive
Things I'll never forget

Through all these broken years
Lost my heart, lost my mind
Looking for the closure
I know I'll neve..."

Ooh! I like it! I really respect poetry that gets into the writer and makes people think about themselves in a new perspective instead of what others poets write regarding things like...glass.

Here's one of mine and I am trying to get it published.

Do Not
Do not haunt me with my sorrows
Do not shelter me with dread
Do not uncover my fears
and leave me for dead.

Do not rid me of love
Do not disguise my escapes
Do not shatter my hopes
for my own life's sake.

Do not darken my path
Do not lure me today
Do not erase my memories
to bestow them away.

Do not eradicate my logic
do not reject my imperfection
do not embark on my endeavors
that morph my reflection.

You will cease to confuse me.
Your game will stop before it begins
because the battle has been over
for I am the one who wins.

Shadowhunter Girl wrote: "Apoorva wrote: "What has happened to me?
All I feel is regret
Things I'll never forgive
Things I'll never forget

Through all these broken years
Lost my heart, lost my mind
Looking for the closure
..."

Lol thanks. :)