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message 1: by Wʀɛռ (last edited Apr 19, 2013 04:44PM) (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) If your charrie is too powerful I'll ask you to change it.

Name:
Age:
Date of birth:
Gender:
Class:
Kingdom: (The kingdom their species is originally from)
Species:
Appearance:
Personality: (Four sentences)
History: (Please try to go in depth)
Weapon:
Abilities: (Only if you're a creature)
Skills: (marksmanship, swordsmanship, riding, magic...)
Other:


message 2: by Wʀɛռ (last edited Apr 19, 2013 04:49PM) (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) Name: Charlotte
Age: 21
Date of birth: February 15th
Gender: Female
Class: Warrior
Kingdom: Human
Species: Human
Appearance:
description
description
Personality: Charlotte is kind-hearted and very understanding. She loves new things and doesn't mind when people ask her about being blind. She always plays with the bandages at her eyes when she's nervous. She still has to wear bandages because she has scars where her eyes used to be.
History: Charlotte was full of wonder and talent as a child. Her eyes were so full of wonder. She had a two questions and one answer for everything she saw. In the end she became a warrior with a bow as her weapon. This wasn't a choice of hers, but she did it so her younger brother William wouldn't have to go to war when he was only fourteen. She was seventeen. She was the most skilled marksman in the entire army, but it didn't last long. She was ambushed by an enemy soldier. He was the same age as her brother, she just couldn't kill him. The boy expected a cold and heartless man, not a kindhearted girl. Instead of killing her, he stabbed her eyes so she would never hit another one of his comrades with her arrows. He might as well have killed her. She was sent home before her wounds had closed and her brother left to replace her. Her parents had died of disease while she was away. She was alone.
Weapon: Bow and arrows, as seen in picture.
Skills: Marksmanship
Other: She is blind like a potato.


message 3: by Antonia (last edited Apr 21, 2013 05:03PM) (new)

Antonia (adf7793) Name: Avalon

Age: 19

Date of birth: October 9th

Gender: Female

Class: The Princess

Kingdom: Human

Species: Human

Appearance:
Miranda kerr photo: miranda kerr mk107.jpg

miranda kerr photo: Miranda Kerr 3 MirandaKerr3.jpg

Personality: Avalon is a bold, energetic young woman who loves to have a fun time. Her aura radiates confidence, her impeccable physique helps with that. Avalon may not be that strong, so luckily she's highly intelligent and extremely clever, which she uses to her advantage. She's the out wit, out smart kind of princess.

Avalon draws people in with her irresistible charisma, she loves to smile and laugh. Her bubbly attitude and positive outlook on life is infectious to those around her. She has this sweet and innocent exterior to herself, but really she's sassy and sarcastic with a witty tongue. She's truthful... boarder lining blunt.

She can make you smile with a single word, but also knows when it’s time to be serious. Unlike most people, she always realizes when she’s in a tough situation or in a losing argument. In a flash, she’s able to turn the tables and make it so she always ends up on top. When she doesn't want to be bothered, she’ll put up a brick wall between you and herself. Usually she’ll avoid you with her eyes if she’s mad at you.

Avalon is extremely gifted with magic and spends most of her time practicing spells; it’s her favorite hobby. Typically she can be found with her nose in her spell book, or fighting a training dummy. Avalon's been practicing magic a long time, so she's learned to control it. But don't make the mistake of thinking she doesn't have her bad days, when things go wrong, because she does. Her magic is incredibly strong though, and if you actually succeed in making her mad...run. She doesn't forgive easily.

History: Avalon is the only daughter, and Princess born to the the King and Queen of the Human Kingdom, and she hates it. She is viewed as a pawn, a game piece to be used, whether it's as a public figure head or an trade in negotiations. Her role is to speak when spoken to, to act as the perfect lady at all times. And, yes, while she is good at playing her public role, she plays another role as well. She has a silver tongue, and can convince people to do what she wants with little or no effort, all without them even realizing what she has done.

In fact most, if not all, of the only helpful policies being passed in the Human Kingdom are do to her. Avalon loves her people and hates the way that her father has shut himself off from the world, and refuses to help them. Avalon tries in vain to persuade her father to stand up and be the King that the Kingdom deserves. So she puts all the effort that she can possibly muster into the the improvement of their lives. All without anyone ever knowing. But Avalon doesn't want recognition, all she wants is the improved quality of life for her people.

Avalon has been known to sneak out of the castle at times, though they always have a hard time finding her. She loves to travel in secret to the villages, using her knowledge in the magic of healing to help her people, especially those who can't afford the help. Avalon's people will always come first in her heart, even if they never know what she has done for them. She's one of the only ones in the royal family that try to improve the lives of all of the subjects in the Human Kingdom.

Weapon: Magic Staff (view spoiler)

Abilities: None

Skills: Persuasion, Diplomacy, Magic (view spoiler)

Other:


message 4: by Wʀɛռ (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) It's okay if you're a princess.


message 6: by Wʀɛռ (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) I Like hugs!


message 7: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 20, 2013 08:53AM) (new)

Name: Skye Falcon

Age: 19

Date of birth: 13 July

Gender: Female

Class: Knight

Kingdom: Human

Species: Human

Appearance:


Personality: Skye is a loyal knight to the humans, strong in her job and proud of heart. She is always true to the humans and against the Shadows. She will fight with all her might against the Shadows and those against humans, fighting to her death to protect her home.
She knows most guys fall for her looks and her red hair, and she uses that to tease them. She flirts slightly with male humans on her side, often playing hard to get to get them on her trail. To help with the effect, she likes to flick her red hair from in front of her face over her shoulder while giving them a slightly cheeky look.
Skye is bold, standing up for what she thinks is right. She likes to be a good friend and likes to make her friends happy. She's usually happy, but when angered is very dangerous to her enemies.

History: Skye lived a pretty good life with her mother and father. Her mother was a noble and her father was a knight, Skye's role model. When she was five, her mother gave birth to her twin brothers, sadly causing her to die from the birth. Dawn helped to raise her brothers Jackson and Christopher. As she grew with them, it was clear that they would be bad knights, so her father urged her on to be a knight like himself. Skye happily obliged and became a knight when she was old enough. She has trained hard in being a knight, and when she developed really good skills, she chilled it down a bit, flirting with guys. When someone asks her why she does what she does, Skye says that you only live once as who you are.

Weapon: Twin swords that stay on her back in an x cross.

Skills: Swordsmanship

Other: She has two younger twin brothers who are 14 - Jackson "Jack" and Christopher "Chris". Her father is a knight too.


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Name: Arwen Fae
{Nicknames} Falcon
Age: 13
Date of birth: 6th July 1999
Gender: Female
Class: Soldier/ Fighter
Kingdom: People of the forest
Species: Person of the forest/ Elf
Appearance: http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lvf...

Personality: Arwen is very brave and is a loyal fighter to her people. She fears almost nothing, and will go to extreme measures to prove someone wrong. As an elf, she has a strong bond with the forest, and has impressive aim with a bow and arrows. Arwen is very arrogant and isn't afraid to pick a fight with someone.

History: Arwen's parents fell victim to the human race when on her 10th birthday. Since then, she's been trying to worm her way out of war. A blacksmith taught her how to sparr and shoot, to defend herself as an orphan. When Arwen was twelve, a dragon hatched to her. She's now a dragon rider but likes to keep it a secret, and knows it helps her with fighting. Because it's so secret, nobody is afraid of Arwen, and she likes to keep it that way. For her, a bit of rebelliousness and fighting are healthy. Her dragon;s name is Firnen, and he's a green color, so he blends in well with the landscape.

Weapon: Bow and arrows.
http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__c...

Skills: dragon riding, and horse- riding, as well as archery. The only magic she can do is by uttering the word 'sylvakeris vlen' which enables her to see through Firnen's eyes.

((Please tell me if the dragon rider bit is OK. If it isn't tell me and i'll edit. Thanks. :D ))


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

((another Eragon fan, yay!))


Pennie “ᙓᕓᙓᖇϒ〇ᘉᙓ’ᔕ ᙧᙓᖳᖇᗪ‚ ᖳ’ᙨ ᙪᖳᔓᗩᖇᖇᙓ” Name: Derek Nickson

Age: 23

Date of birth: 3/26

Gender: Male

Class: General

Kingdom: Human

Species: Human

Appearance: http://s1.hubimg.com/u/331348_f496.jpg

Personality: Derek has been strong and cold for a long time. Nothing has gotten to his shell of a heart. He isn't competitive, nor nice. He could be imaginative and creative. He could be quick and smart. But he is dead inside with all the knowledge his mind holds. He knows how to fight. He knows Math and Science. He knows EVERYTHING! Well, except love or things he doesn't know about yet. Like the Shadows or the history of his world. All he knows is that there are crazed dead people coming back to life.

Derek has absolutely no emotions. No fear, no worry, and no love. He's cold and logical. Filled with binary codes and well, logic. There's no soul or spirit in him. Touch him and you can feel his coldness.

History: Derek has never known love. Only knowledge. His parents beat him if he didn't study. He always had to read books in his house. And every week be given a test and pass with an 100 or beaten. So he passed every test and developed a great memory. He has remembered everything since the age of six and has read over 1,000 books. He knows math an Science to all of it's roots. And his parents forced him to study human sociology, psychology, and behavior. That he learned at nine. Derek knows no love and won't ever show it to anyone.

His father taught him fighting skills and military tactics. Everything he has learned was from the home. Though he has learned everything from the books, his parents never taught him about what's right and wrong.

His parents moved away when Derek could take care of himself and he did. He went and became a knight, knowing nothing else to do and continued from there with his amazing knowledge.

Weapon: Knowledge or his sword

Skills: Memory

Other: He doesn't believe in things that don't make sense with logic.


message 11: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 25, 2013 07:56AM) (new)

Name: Jasper Treville

Age: 20

Date of birth: 23 June

Gender: Male

Class: Soldier

Kingdom: Human

Species: Human

Appearance:


Personality: Jasper is strong on the inside and out, often not showing others his feelings or emotions. He is a brave soldier and will fight to his death for the humans and their survival. He likes to have fun and can be a really nice guy if/when you get to know him. If his loved ones are threatened or hurt in anyway, he can get really mad and angry as he gets very protective of them. He follows orders like a good soldier and will carry them out to the word. He likes horses.

History: Jasper was raised in an average home, but it had a wide paddoc as it's back yard and his family, which consisted of his mother, father and two older brothers, kept horses. With his brothers and his father, he developed good horse and riding skills, loving the feel of riding one at a canter. His mare was called Tanay, and she was a chestnut with a black mane and tail. His family got through tough times with money, always a happy family and relying on the others for support. When his oldest brother, Michael, joined the army, he sent money back home to them. To help even more, Jasper entered horse competitions with Tanay, and usually won. His second brother, Alec, joined the army to help even more and to be with Michael. Jasper started to get lonley at home, only his horses and his parents for company. He couldn't do much with his father as he was a warrior. Jasper soon gave in and joined the army too to be with his brothers who he loved dearly. So far his horse skills have come in handy. He also learnt how to use a double-handed long sword well.

Weapon: Long sword

Skills: Swordsmanship and horse riding.

Other: Brothers - oldest, Michael; second, Alec. Father and mother are both alive.
Jasper's horse - (view spoiler)
Michael's horse - (view spoiler)
Alec's horse - (view spoiler)
Father's horses - (view spoiler)
For Jasper to give away when the colt is older - (view spoiler)
All chosen for their amazing ability. Yes, even Tanay, even though she doesn't look it. Super fast and strong, obidient to the Treville family. The brothers all have mares and their father has three stalions. Steldor is the colt of Tanay and Baelic. Jasper wants to give Steldor to Avalon as a gift.


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Kristin (R.I.P MCR) wrote: "((another Eragon fan, yay!))"

lol. Yup. I just finished the series. WHat I have to say on it: O.M.G. Phenomenal.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

I know! I cried at the end of Inheritance. Each time I read those last two pages I burst out into tears. Even the dragons are crying! :D


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

I guess we have a similar mind when it comes to Christopher's greatest works.


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

:D Did you know he's writing a sci-fi book atm?


message 16: by Wʀɛռ (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) Sarah wrote: "Name: Arwen Fae
{Nicknames} Falcon
Age: 13
Date of birth: 6th July 1999
Gender: Female
Class: Soldier/ Fighter
Kingdom: People of the forest
Species: Person of the forest/ Elf
Appearance: http://25..."


It's okay, but please note that most dragons can turn into humans and are part of the Sky Kingdom.


message 17: by Wʀɛռ (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) Arwen and Skye are both approved.


message 18: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 20, 2013 09:49AM) (new)

Yay! Thanks!


message 19: by Wʀɛռ (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) Kristin (R.I.P MCR) wrote: "Name: Jasper Treville

Age: 19

Date of birth: 23 June

Gender: Male

Class: Soldier

Kingdom: Human

Species: Human

Appearance:
Personality: Jasper is strong on the inside and out, often not sho..."


Approved!


message 20: by Elizabeth (last edited Apr 21, 2013 12:41PM) (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Name: Alexandria (Alex)
Age: 18
Date of birth: May 9th
Gender: Female
Class: Assassin
Kingdom:Human
Species: Human
Appearance:
description
Personality: Alex is very hesitant to trust others most of the time. She was once betrayed by someone she trusted and now is weary to trust others because if it. Once she sets her mind to something nothing can stop her, and she always finishes a job once she starts it. To the few people she does trust she's loyal to, but if you do betray her....she'll hunt you down....
History: Both her parents died when she was young, so she had to look out for herself as she had no other family. She started out as a thief, at first taking only what she had to to survive, then starting to steal stuff for others before eventually starting to assassinate people...for the right price of course. So far she's only ever been caught once, and only because she was set up, betrayed by someone she'd trusted. She escaped, and hunted them down, killing them.
Weapon: Daggers...many daggers.
Skills: Silent, sneaky, very good aim with throwing daggers
Other Part of the Creed


message 21: by Wʀɛռ (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) Note that there is a creed for assassins that are more skilled. Assassins from the creed get payed more than some assassin on the street, but other than that, Alexandria is approved.


message 22: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Yay! So how do I get her in the Creed?


message 23: by Spadez (or Nyx) (last edited Apr 21, 2013 07:28PM) (new)

Spadez (or Nyx) | 7 comments Name: katara
Age: 18
Date of birth: december 25th
Gender: female
Class: warrior
kingdom: elf
Species: elf
Apperance:
Personality: (four sentences) katara is really nice, sweet, patient and understanding. She loves helping others but is really quiet. But dont take her forgranted, she can eventually get mad.
History: katara used to always look up to her older sister, scar, but one day a shadow possesed man came and killed her village when she was gone, but by time she came back, it was too late, her sister was already possesed by a shadow. Katara still to this day doesnt know why scar let her live, she believes she should be dead, but that she must be alive for a reason
Weapon: none
Abilities: can speak to animals and can control water
Skill: (marksmanship, swordsmanship, riding, magic...) Magic
Other: scar is her older sister and only she knows scar's real name.


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

Wren wrote: "Arwen and Skye are both approved."

Thanks!


message 25: by Wʀɛռ (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) Elizabeth wrote: "Yay! So how do I get her in the Creed?"

Well you can just say you're a part of it. I'm going to make the rules of the creed once there's more than one assassin.


message 26: by Antonia (new)

Antonia (adf7793) Finally finished <3
What do you think?


message 27: by Wʀɛռ (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) Approved!


message 28: by Wʀɛռ (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) φεΩΩíε wrote: "Name: Derek Nickson

Age: 23

Date of birth: 3/26

Gender: Male

Class: General

Kingdom: Human

Species: Human

Appearance: http://s1.hubimg.com/u/331348_f496.jpg

Personality: Derek has been str..."


Approved


message 29: by Wʀɛռ (last edited Apr 21, 2013 05:08PM) (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) Name: Fable
Age: 20
Date of birth: October 20th
Gender: Male
Class: Prince
Kingdom: Human
Species: Human
Appearance:
description
Personality: Fable is known for his eccentric personality and inability to be compassionate. But it isn't true. He is compassionate and very understanding. He may act eccentric, but his every movement and expression are calculated to the last detail.
History: Fable grew up being pissed at his father. Because the king just wants to live in his own little world pretending nothing will affect him in the castle. When it was found out what the Shadows had been doing his father had done nothing and he hated it. He wants to overthrow his father so he could get the world straight and push the Shadows out of the kingdom.
Weapon:
description
Skills: He is a master swordsman
Other:


message 30: by Spadez (or Nyx) (new)

Spadez (or Nyx) | 7 comments Is katara approved?


message 31: by Wʀɛռ (new)

Wʀɛռ (Cactus_Wren) Yes!


message 32: by Spadez (or Nyx) (new)

Spadez (or Nyx) | 7 comments Thanks :D


message 33: by tara (last edited Apr 22, 2013 04:58PM) (new)

tara wolfprism (tarawolfprism) UNDER CONSTRUCTION! (For real this time :D)
(view spoiler)


message 34: by Immy (new)

Immy How do you insert pics?


message 35: by Immy (new)

Immy This is what I got so far but be warned. I will insert pics later.


Name: Eleta Summers

Age: 17

Date of birth: 11 Jan

Gender: Female

Class: Preistess (but makes weapons which is a hobbie)

Kingdom: Alagaësia

Species:Elve, Preistess

Appearance:

My hair is blonde, long and wavy with a streak on my
left side to the front that changes colours to match my colours of my eyes.

My eyes turn different colours to match the element that I am performing eg. grey for air, green for earth, blue for water and BRIGHT orangy-red for fire, Gold for light, Dark browny purple for Darkness).
Height:Average Elf height.
Weight:I am about 45 kg.

When I use my power I get a tatoo across my face. I dragon on the right side of my face that curls down my shoulder and down my arm to my wrist. Same for water (waves) air (series of curls) earth (a vine with small curls coming of the main vine, a curl under my eye and the end is a curl under the left side of my eyeborw) darkness (lots of black dots) light (glowing flowers)

Personality: subborn. friendly, , witty, smart, cheeky, protective of her friends, pranskter, calm, can be quiet, quick temper when serriously angered but can be SUPER calm ect...

History: Was orphaned at the age of 5 and survived in the forest for 10 years. A preist found her and trained her. She makes weapons in her own time as a hobbie. Owns a small hut next to a river in a rainforest.
Weapon: a bow, dagger, sword, staff, powers

Abilities: Can control the elements (eg. earth, fire, water, air, darkness, light.)

Skills: magic, making Weapons, riding, archery, run
ing, climber, swordsmanship

Other: Clothing:I love to look in fashion but I mainly wear hunting gear. eg. leggings. boot. Leather jacket.


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

Immy, read this for the kingdom, class and species
http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/1...


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