Writer's Advice discussion

Wow... Just realized that I never made a chat thread... -.- Anywho, how's everyone doing? You've been kinda quite recently. Is everyone doing well, I hope?

Hi Glinda - just wondering where to post this little poem for some feedback:

Love is not possible in our street
The house has taken me, and rejected you
I want to care, I want to feel pain,
but there is nothing left
Now we walk through different doors
We pass each other with eyes unseeing
Waiting only to be released
Lingering past the point of no return
Seeking one little spark to ignite the storm
But the house has decided...
Love is not possible in our street.
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Brenda

I love it, Brenda! :D If you want, you can make a folder for your poetry under the poetry section, so you can continue posting your poetry and (hopefully) get feedback from other members of the group. :)

Thanks for the feedback - I will make a folder soon - just have to finish off an article I'm writing about 'Leisure and Popular Culture' (circa 16th/17th Century) and the rise of todays 'Reality TV'.

hi every-one.

Hey, Erie! Sorry I didn't get back quicker, my internet was down the past couple days :P What's up?

i have so many attempts
to escape the pain that seems
to bud inspiration on my
thoughts as life takes me
by the hand.