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Agreed, Lauren. I thought the novel's language and style were fantastic. I remember that pigeon line, and I loved that as well.
A few lines struck me as particularly well done, and of course I was too lazy to highlight them in my kindle. So, there goes that.
But your collection here is a good one. :)
A few lines struck me as particularly well done, and of course I was too lazy to highlight them in my kindle. So, there goes that.
But your collection here is a good one. :)
Mine are Kindled as well, and I didn't do a very good job of highlighting key points and quotes.




I have several, but here are a few from early in the novel to get the ball rolling:
Ch. 1: "The jeweler's English was almost perfect, the vowels a shade too rich, the consonants a touch too precise: English words set to Italian music."
Ch. 2: "[The T-shirt] could even have belonged to Caroline, if she had not mistrusted collective movements."
Ch. 3: "Mrs. John Wharlton Bunney dresses like a pigeon, although she probably believed herself a dove."
For what it's worth, this last one might be one of my favorite character descriptions ever.
Anyone else have some favorite lines or comments about the style and tone?