Writing a Book discussion

Mine is called tThe Shade of Night

yes, i am..
mine is called heart gallery.

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heres part of mine Running through the forest with blinding speed I looked behind me to see if the hunters were behind me, they were'nt. I skidded to a halt, looked around for any danger. My name is Damian and im a vampire. I've been hunted for hours by the vampire hunters called the Hemoslayers. As far as I know I am the last vampire in the world, and they are out to kill me.
As I started forward slowly to keep track of anything that might be following me, I heard footsteps and a Hummer behind me, I burst into a run leaving no tracks. I heard a gunshot and the bullet whizzed by my head, i spun around and there was one of the Hemoslayers standing there in his black armor. I sprinted to him and was in front of him in a half of a second. He shot at me and the bullet bounced off of my skin. I chuckled as I drew back my arm and threw a punch that sent him flying into a tree, breaking it upon impact. I continued my flee, laughing at the hunters plight.
As a vampire my wings come out in the sunlight, and i can't pull them back in. Because of this i generally try to stay indoors during the day. Unfortunately, while i was out hunting in the forest I happened to run into the hunters who were camping. I mainly feed on animals, but i will feed on humans. When vampires don't feed we become enraged and our eyes turn an intense bright red. Once our thirst is quenched our eyes are blue as the sky.
Flapping my wings, i leapt into the air, and flew toward my cave. Landing softly inside, I pulled in my wings.Sighing i dropped to the ground, and thought about what I had done today. The guy i killed could've had a family to go to or had another job, I shuddered at the memory of the tree breaking with his impact. The memory of our encounter was horrifying, i was chasing a deer, toying with it. I chased it north, smelled smoke, but ignored it. I stopped when i heard a gun being loaded. when i burst into a run, I heard cars being started. They sped up beside me, but I could outrun them. I had to lower their numbers, so I rammed one with my shoulder, sending it flying into the river.i sped up then, getting away from them.

Yeah.I am too. It's not very good though.*Shrugs*

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Hey Jerry and you know that I'm working on my second book called "Blood Chalice" but I guess I better say (write) it for the rest of the group.

im writing a book called midnight. its a vampire book. it has some of the same things that twilight had in it but a sort of different plot. the first chapter is rather boring though. its sort of like what cassies life was before she left and started to live with her mom. her mom was raped but cassiews dad and her dad took cassie away from her mother. the second chapter is about when she starts to go to a different school in a different place, living with her mom, and falling for a vampire named dillon. Sean, one of her friends from when she lived with her dad turns out to be a werewolf and the fight over cassie until she cant take it any more. Cassie fell in love with the both but knows she cant have both of them. she has to choose. Sean, her closest friend when she lived with her dad, comes to visit her where she lives with her mother. Dillon doesnt like him at all. He says he smells wrong. He doesnt smell like a human and he doesnt smell like a vampire. He says he smells like a werewolf.

My novel is a kind of offbeat adventure/drama, set in lower-class neighbourhoods of Vancouver, BC. It's called Owe Nothing, and features (in no particular order):

- a car wash which is a front for covert detective agency)
- a bullet-riddled car, hidden at said car wash
- violent, alcoholic bad guys, who get theirs in the end
- intense family drama
- people pushed to emotional extremes
- a hopeful ending and future

Sample chapters are online at http://fiction.ejohnlove.com

(My next novel will feature the same characters/same world, but different and expanded themes...)

I've added my novel Owe Nothing to the book shelf here...

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interisting even to me. i love stories. any kind really. ill read any thiing i can get my hand on

WAKING UP JEAN by me (J.A. Townsend)

The first two chapters are here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

I liked you story *WAKING UP JEAN*

I've changed the title a few times, but right now I've settled on, "The Deconstruction of Mary." You can read the prologue here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Let me know what you think.

Peggy Randall-Martin

Hello, I am new here.

I'm a new author of romance books. My first book Finding Pride is NOW FREE on Smashwords!!! Limited time only! Take a look and help me out by reading/reviewing it. You can learn more about me and the four book series at http://www.prideseries.com

Thank you in advance.

--Jill


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Hello,

My debut novel, Dead by Morning, was recently published by Rambunctious Ramblings Publishing so I'm super excited about it :) It's a new adult psychological horror/thriller novel. It's on Amazon now for 2.99 :)



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Obsession is deadly. No one learns that better than Luna Ketz, a pessimistic high school senior. She wishes more than anything to graduate but things don’t always go as planned. Luna quickly finds herself trapped in a web of lies and murders, spun by the least suspected person in her hometown. It’s not long before she realizes she’s being targeted by the person she despises most in the world. When Luna figures out who is behind the killings, things make a turn for the bizarre when she is contacted by a friend she has not heard from in years. It is then Luna realizes she is very much in danger, but although she can avoid the killer in reality, she cannot avoid him in her dreams.