Gifted discussion

Charli: I smile. "Cool. Thanks for helping me." I say as we walk to the house

Jonah: "I wouldn't leave you there," I open the front door, and see my grandma cooking something.

Jonahs grandma: "Jonah Tate! There you are! I've been called that you ditched school, talked backed to teachers, stole something from the drug store, and- is that a tattoo??" I panicked, seeing the girl with him. We never had visitors. "and who is this?" I wipe my hands on a dish rag, my facial expression turning from scolding to interested and sincere. "hello dear," I shake the girls hand, "I'm mrs. Sutton, but call me Kate," I smiled warmly.

Charli: "Um.." I say, trying to take in everything at once. "I'm Charli." I said while shaking her hand

Jonah: "hi grandma," I pecked her lightly on the cheek. "this is charli, and she... She's gonna stay with us for a bit. That allright?" My grandma thinks it over, then sighs. "of course," she smiles. "great." I tug charli up the stairs and lead her down the hall to a room at the end of the hall. "your room. Bathroom's inside." I open the most spacy bedroom.
((the house is log cabin ish- everything looks woodsy))

Charlie: I look at him and then hug him. "Thank you."

Jonah: "don't worry about it," I rest y head on hers, closing my eyes. A hug felt nice, for once.

Charli: I smile. "You're really nice, Jonah."

Jonah: nice? I've never, ever been called nice. What would she think when she found out how I really acted?? "uh- thanks," I blush. "how?"

Charli: I shrug my shoulders. "You just are."

Jonah: "I- well... I'm not a nice person." I admitted.

Charli: I shrugged my shoulders. "To me you are."

Jonah: "charli," I said serious, "I'm not. I bully people, annoy them, sometimes hurt them. I steal, lie, and cheat," I grimace. "not to mention the numerous times I've been to juvie."

Charli: I look at him. "Then why do you do it?"

Jonah: "I..... I don't know," I admitted. "Its a habit." I quote her. I've actually grown up this way, no rules or restrictions.

Charli: "Okay." I hug him again and let go and walk into the room and put my bag down

Jonah: im reproved that she doesn't judge me, or gets frightened or defensive, like most people do.

Charli: I sit on the bed and grab my sketch book a and start to draw a girl. in the country

Jonah: I knock on charli's door after about thirty minutes, to give her a tour of the fifty acres of land my grandparents owned.

Charli : I look. up at the open door and close my book and leave it on the best and get up and walk to the door. "Yes?"

Jonah: "uh- I just came to ask if... You'd like a tour..." I jam my hands in my pockets.

Charli: I giggle. "Sure." I say as I walk out of the room

Jonah: "well my grandparents own about fifty acres of forest and field, and theres some things I want to show you," I grab keys off a hook, and lead her around to a shed. The shed was like a little garage, and a quad and offroading truck sat inside. "wait here." I back out the giant truck, before hopping down to help charli up the other side. When we were both stationed inside, I drove the truck noisily to our first stop- the edge of the forest.

Charli: I stare at everything in amazement

Jonah: I pull up alongside the forest, hiding the truck in the trees. "come this way," we jump from the truck, and I take her on a mini nature walk to a small waterfall that trickled into a stream, eventually somewhere going into a lake. "you're welcome to go anywhere on the property, just don't get lost."

Charli: I stare at the stream. "Okay." I say after a while

Charli: I follow the stream to the lake and sit down. It felt nice and calm here, and i like that. I smile as I see fish in the lake

Jonah: I join charli, Sitting on a nearby fallen log. "it's nice out today," I noted, the crisp fall air cooling my skin. ((let's say it's about four pm?))

(Okay)
Charli: I nod my head, starting to wonder if he likes me.

Jonah: "we should probably go. There's somewhere else I'd like to show you," I say brightening.
((what should it be? It's a wide open amount of land, with the forest and lake, what else should be on the land?? Like what would make charli super happy or something))

(O.o oh boy..........................um like a scenery like......................ugh cant think of a thing:()

((lmao! Maybe like a treehouse or a stable or a fame or a waterfall or....???))

(Tree house sure)

Charli: I follow Jomah

(( kk lol feel free to narrate more))
Jonah: We drive around the perimeter of the forest, and I stop at the end. We walk along a peaceful and scenic forest path, and it breaks off into a giant tree overlooking the edge of the lake. I proudly present the tree house me and my grandpa had made when I was 9. This treehouse was my refuge, my secret hideout.

Charli: I stare upvat the tree house abduction gaze at it. it was really cool. I smiled at Jonah, who had a big smile on his face

Charli: I stare upvat the tree house abduction gaze at it. it was really cool. I smiled at Jonah, who had a big smile on his face

Jonah: "come on up!" I boost her up to the rolled up rope ladder.
((maybe she can be happy about it and stuff, so she can paint

(ok ..... and earlier I was on an ipod.......it died) Charli: I climb up and walk to the edge of the tree house when j get up there. I share at everything and Mike. I wanted to paint it SO bad!

Jonah: "this is where I've always escaped to. If you ever... You know... Need to escape, come here instead of ... Drawing those things- you'd be able to live in here for a week or so- food water and whatever else you might need is in jere."

Charli: I look at him. "What do you mean, drawing those. things?" was he saying I was a thong?

((lol))
Jonah: "those drawings of yourself."

(Know I got the iPod back! With its charger)
Charli: I look down at my feet. "Not all of them ate bad. Those where when I cried or when I thought about killing myself." I look at the sky. "Drawing in that book saved my life." I hope he understands me and gets what I mean.

Jonah: I try not to look confused."o-oh?makes sense..." I trailed off.

Charli: I sigh. Such a boy. I continue to stare outside.

Jonah: "well!" I clap my hands together. "let's get back home, shall we?" ((I think the police are gonna be waiting for them at his house Nd chase Jonah))

(Oh goodie)
Charli: I climb down and get in the truck

Charli: I wait for Jonah to join me

Jonah: I hop back in the truck and start the engine. We drive back towards the house, and I don't see the four police cars and FBI truck out in front of the house until we turn the corner of the forest. My eyes widen, and I spin the truck back around.

Jonahs grandma: A while after Jonah left, the authorities knocke ok our door. They started asking questions about a girl, and about stolen drugs from the drug store that wa supposed to induce drowsiness. Their theory was that Jonah kidnapped her and was drugging her at this very moment. I protested, but I was uncertain anymore if Jonah would do that.

((you can descriptively play the police guys if you want))

Police: Some of us are outside. We notice a truck and get in one of he cara and go after them, sirens blaring, and two of us go, one stops he truck in the front, the other in the back so it can't drive backwards.

Charli: I look at the police like they where crazy and watch as one of them from both cars gets out and he FBI start coming and surrounding us