Young Writers discussion

Its a story about a group of 4 kids who are stuck in a movement of a people called the Awakeners and they try to take over the earth. They try to make a new country and world with districts and all the people on Earth are trapped in concentration camps while they build their new empire. The band of four kids Tate, Dylan, Andrew, and Brandon who have to escape the concentration camps and stop the movement will they win or be awakened?

Post some chapters, yes?

You like the story?

Eh…it sounds cliche, but that's why I want to read some. So I can really see if it's good. :)

I'm moving this topic to the Dystopia folder.