Young Writers discussion

All my story's take place on the planet Crystal, a world with magic crystals in it's senter.From the floating islands of the Griffins, to the living city's of the Elfs, All magic comes from these crystals. This is the story of a griffin who lost everything, and an elf who betrayer her kind to protect a servant of the most evil and twisted villain ever ever to walk on the face of the Crystal.

Doesnt really sound like it has a plot

Nah, I can see a bit of plot there. Just not a detailed conflict.

Sounds interesting! But you might want to consider renaming it because I think there's another fantasy book already out called the floating islands.